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Reviews For: In The Cavern

Jenna Hyuga 2008-07-17 ch 12,	abuseThat's sad, but very wonderful. I love your writing, and this story gives a place to Clanker. It's amazing, sis, and it would be great to see more like it! Keep up the amazing work!
Pasta Masta 2008-07-04 ch 12,	abuseThat was a great ending to a great fic, and I applaud your success. I found it funny how Clanker truly blushed when Kazooie gave him a little kiss, and tearfully bid him farewell, a very nice touch, indeed. Banjo is so kind and modest; that's what I'd call a friend. All in all, this fic was a major win, and a pleasure to read. :) Continue sharing your talent with the ff world, adios.
Pasta Masta 2008-06-09 ch 8,	abuseWhy haven't I reviewed this awesome fic yet? Anyhow, this a great fic. I'm glad someone decided to write about Clanker. Poor Gloop. It was so odd to see Kazooie treating Clanker so nicely; she must have some feelings for him. Well, I would like to think so, it'd be awful for Clanker to be Kazooie-less for the rest of his life. Nice job so far, keep up the brilliant work.
FortuneNeko 2008-06-06 ch 8,	abuseWow I cried. And that's a big deal for me. Your story is really great, i'm glad I read it. Thanks!
Shadow Goo 2008-06-06 ch 7,	abuseAww, I like the bit with Klungo at the end. I like to imagine him being kind of confused and lonely, what with how Gruntilda treats him, and it kind of adds to what he does in Banjo-Tooie.
Kiminochi 2008-05-17 ch 1,	abuseThis is very good story! Update more! Oh yeah! I saw you changed the summary for Fields of Hope! It makes it even more interesting! Was it something I did to make you change it? But anyway Update!
Twilight Vestige 2008-05-15 ch 1,	abuseThis is very good so far. It's an interesting take on the BK series too. Very good. adds to favorites and alerts
Shadow Goo 2008-04-19 ch 4,	abuseAw, how sad. Though I wonder what'll happen between Clanker and the Bear/Bird duo after this. Maybe it'll turn out they missed like 50 notes and wind up having to come back? Will defeating Gruntilda somehow make a wall burst in Clanker's Cavern and free him? Was Clanker actually inexplicably blushing somehow, or was it his imagination? The plot suspensifies! I still think Banjo's lacking some of his goofy friendliness and cheery demeanor, though...I dunno, I think he would be a bit more talkative and probably try to cheer Clanker up somehow as opposed to how he seems to be all..."meh" here. How Banjo's character is written is pretty much my only criticism so far, but Banjo's goofiness is one of the main things I like about him, so I suppose it might be a bit more important to me than other people.
futures past115 2008-04-18 ch 4,	abuseQuite an excellent story, I must say. I really hope you decide to continue this, maybe write some new chapters describing events that happen while the pair are gone, what happens to him after the end of the game, where he is in Banjo Tooie, and obviously his relationship with Kazooie. Please keep up the good work.
Shadow Goo 2008-04-04 ch 3,	abuseWow, ask and ye shall receive, it seems. I'm glad we meet Banjo and Kazooie in this chapter, but it really didn't seem like Banjo's character to be the one to bring up the topic of a reward. I also wondered for a moment why Gruntilda was talking with her sisters instead of, you know, actually getting to work on stealing Tooty's beauty. Typical villain overconfidence, perhaps? It must also be awfully worrisome to have suddenly met new friends only to have to worry for their safety immediately aftwerwards as they enter your gills and deal with the clockwork horrors of your insides. Very interesting. It really sucks that no one else seems to be reviewing this, because it deserves it.
Shadow Goo 2008-04-02 ch 2,	abuseFinally, an actually interesting and well-written Banjo-Kazooie fic! The concept is really quite intriguing, and it really shows some of the darker parts and details of the game that I never really thought about. Gruntilda had always been abusive, but when portrayed in a less comical fashion like this, it's really quite depressive. The expounding on the other details of the level, like the rusty water, mutant snippets, the creaking of Clanker's joints, Gloop, the giant chain, and so forth, is also quite a treat. I greatly look forward to more chapters of this.

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