That showed some good foreshadowing.

That was pretty amazing! Good story.

I enjoyed that. Good writing.

totally love it!

love rose's attitude!

great work!

can't wait to read the sequel!

i know that there are already many more chapters, but i would really like it if bella came into the story, i mean, i know you said that you wouldn't do that, but please consider it. (and if you've already added her into the story, and i'm being an idiot, sorry about that! lol)

Great story, brilliant interactions and characterisations, poor everyone, great ending.

I loved this story. It was very well-written and, although not strictly canon, was very plausible. I'll look forward to sequel.

great job!

poor edward, though...

please write the sequel

I really loved the story and I can't wait for the sequel!

Excellent story. Can't wait for the sequel!

Good job!

great job showing what edward thought and why he thought wh he did. this story is amazing and i think you should definitely write a sequel. i'm suprised to constantly find my self looking to see if there is a new chapter. thank you for writing this!

great job on the chapter and the story. x

Yay!

Looking forward to the next chapters!

And you should totally write a sequal!

oh I love the chapter! I love how Edward responds to Rosalie's change... love it! Please write a sequel, you're such a great writer!

Please do write a sequel, and another great chapter!