OMG!! IS FANG A FRIGGIN' VAMPIRE! I LOVE FRIGGIN; VAMPIRES! I LIKE, STUDY THEM AND EVERYTHING!1!1! THEY ARE SO FRIIGGIN' COOL!! YOU ARE NOW MY NEW BESTST FRIEND FOR ADDING HIM IN HERE! :D!1!1!!1!11!

Hah. Melissa makes me smile :D Sorry it took me so long to review, I've been avoiding . But I got back into it yesterday so...

Loving the chapter :)

nice twist having the queen back. and don't listen to flame rising you may have slight grammatical mistakes but the plot and the fanfic itself is really good.

sorry about the review before that was on another account that i shouldn't have used to review but i accidentally did

nice twist having the queen back. and don't listen to flame rising you may have slight grammatical mistakes but the plot and the fanfic itself is really good.

HAHAHAHA! THAT POOR GRANDMA! HAHAHAHA!

@ Melissa: It's because he tried to eat her the first time he meet her!

@ YOU! I love this movie and now i love this story! Me gonna keep reading now!

Sorry Sorry Sorry SORRY! I'm sorry, I'm so sorry. I have been so flipping lazy!

Anyways. This chapter was awesome! Poor Melissa though, Edvard's being kinda moody. Nice one moment, guilty the next, evil one moment. I like it, shows a certain character trait ;) Good chapter!

Oh no! Fang's a...a...I won't say it for any who haven't read. Oh my this is getting better and better. All the pasts woven together makes for an interesting and delicate web. I do hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh man, more fun! Yes, yes I think I do like Fang. :) But...but...but...Edvard? :( I was sad to read that part about him - however it certainly made for an interesting turn of events!

I do hope they run into Melissa's parents - if they're alive. :D Of course that's not necessary for the story to be good; I would simply like to see the exchange between them and Melissa. I like that the gypsies were brought back and what is this scary and ominous fortune about? I hope there is a loophole or something to prevent it from happening.

Oh man the mirror. That stinks for them. But! It's great because it allows for more danger and more story. I'm definitely looking forward to more of this little piece.

Yes, it's certain - I like them; these characters. I like how the at the end she got to give him a what for about judging people. It's true too, he doesn't want to be judged but dishes it out pretty handily. I did like you're throwing in of werewolf and Lycanthrope. I always wondered if that was the translation we 10th kingdomers would put or should put on the wolves of the other 9 kingdoms. I would think, with what we see of Wolf, it would be the best correlation; it was nice to see that used. Good job.

YAY they went in! So history, in a way, does repeat itself, eh? :D I am liking this very much, for sure. It's got me hooked. But poor GG - she's got to be so old now she's liable to have a heart attack from those shenanigans again. Granted she is a mean old bat. This story is great fun!

And we see Candy again too! You're doing a fine job here. Your dialog is fun to read and your characterizations are good. I'm enjoying this very much! I can't wait to learn more about these new characters.

This is a great beginning. I like how GG is perfectly in character. Nice job. I'm sad that Melissa had to grow up mostly without her parents however it makes for a nice interlude into the story. I'm curious to learn more about her as well as this boy. Nice, nice, nice!!