Very cool work.

I like the way it is in single sentences.

it makes it seem like thoughts going through someones head.

Very nice.

thats so sad!

really good! yea Fallen Darkness! VS rules!

That is so SAD! But good. IMHO, I think of it as a Cedric/Cho thing. But ur right, it can work 4 ne of them.

This is nice, its kind of confusing in some parts, but its very good and sad. Great job!