Interesting

Okay, this makes me want to finish Jak X. :D I have no idea who UR-86 is, but I love the whole creepy concept behind this fic. You're Keira stories are always awesome.

Hmm... I like it! Honestly, after such a long hiaitus and what with the last chapter of Studying the Unloved being a little subpar, I was starting to worry, but now I'm not. Very good! I like it! ...Maia kept twenty-nine diaries, though? She's... wordier than you'd think, I guess...

Uh...Wow! Wonderful story! Very well-written! I absolutely loved it! You captured Keira's personality greatly, although her frustration seems a little unnatural to me, though I do understand why she's feeling that way. And she's right, in my opinion: From the very beginning of the series, all she's been is Jak's girlfriend and vehicle repairer, nothing else. Fortunately her dream becomes reality: She gets to race, though only for a little while, near the end. Wished she could of played the racing role a bit sooner. Though her quotes on the track are certainly amusing! (Laughs) I feel a bit sorry for her: her Haven racing garage was smashed by the Palace! Damn Veger! (Growls) I loved the Racing Stadiums! The noise was a bit unexpected. For a moment there, I thought that Cyber-Errol would appear wanting a repair like UR-86, but no! Ah, well...Their interaction was strange, in my opinion. I actually thought that the robot wanted to rape her, for some strange reason. Ah, such a twisted mind I have...The ending was scary. Are you going to write a second chapter to this? No, huh? Eh, that's the way you are. Always leaving things hanging...No offense, of course. The beginning and ending quotes with the Dark Sage siblings are cool. I'd like to know more about them. Perhaps I'll read Baroosh Baroosh...Hmm...Anyways, keep up the good work, okay? You are a brilliantly talented author!

This fic was very well-written. You captured Keira's personality well, the same goes for GT Blitz. The UR-86/Keira interaction seems rather strange though.