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| Cheetara 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseSorry I took so long to review, I was kind of busy. Well, I am really impressed as to how well you drew Nakago's character with a few words. Very nice. |
| SultryGamer 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseYou write this so well! It is so hearbreaking that he is carrying her body around even though she is dead and stiffening up, gosh how sad! And what he says at the end I feel so sorry for him. Anyway great short story. Thanks. |
| Kouji Girl 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseIt's sweet and sad at the same time. Short, but there's no need for more words. |