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| Aerimini 2008-06-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay, I should explain before I begin that it's 2:17am and my mind is wandering. So I followed this as well as I could and from what I picked up in my relatively low state of awareness, it's very, very good. Now, I shouild mention that the absolute first thing I noticed is that your grammar is outstanding, as is your spelling. For this, I congratulate you, because sadly, many people are not endowed with such a gift. Anyways, this is a wonderful story and I hope you will be writing more. |
| sweet G 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuse"The sky is blue, Benson and Hedges tastes like ass, chocolate is not a good lubricant and Matt is going to follow Mello, right to the grave." God. I used to be a really die-hard MelloNear fan, and I really, like really, hated MattMelloMatt... But now I can't get enough of it... And your fic is like one of the most nicely written ones out there... Join the review revolution! |
| carlyrose93 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseAh, MelloxMatt. They truly make the world turn 'round. You're an amazing writer. Keep it up! ^-~ P.S. Hilarious ending. (I'd go with the third too. Mello is SEXY!) |