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Aerimini
2008-06-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseOkay, I should explain before I begin that it's 2:17am and my mind is wandering. So I followed this as well as I could and from what I picked up in my relatively low state of awareness, it's very, very good. Now, I shouild mention that the absolute first thing I noticed is that your grammar is outstanding, as is your spelling. For this, I congratulate you, because sadly, many people are not endowed with such a gift. Anyways, this is a wonderful story and I hope you will be writing more.
sweet G
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuse"The sky is blue, Benson and Hedges tastes like ass, chocolate is not a good lubricant and Matt is going to follow Mello, right to the grave."
God. I used to be a really die-hard MelloNear fan, and I really, like really, hated MattMelloMatt... But now I can't get enough of it... And your fic is like one of the most nicely written ones out there...

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carlyrose93
2008-03-23
ch 1,
abuseAh, MelloxMatt. They truly make the world turn 'round.
You're an amazing writer. Keep it up! ^-~
P.S. Hilarious ending. (I'd go with the third too. Mello is SEXY!)
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