Loved this, absoluteley adored this. I was a cinch surprised when I found out they were in elementary school but I still love the coupeles. GAY KUKAI AND NADESHIKO! Ahhh! that's brilliant and ahhh. Yaya's sooo right about them... :)

GAHH! You should write more! Maybe when she gets marked by him, she's literally MARKED. Like magically gets some sort of symbol on her, or she has something majorly different in her appearance!

;p

This Is An Awesome Book, and it would be a great ending... but it has sooo much potential!

I love it. Although is was completely random, it was unpredictable. And you wrote an auto story without making Tadase some psycho freak. And thank you for not writing a lemon.

I love it. Although is was completely random, it was unpredictable. And you wrote an auto story without making Tadase some psycho freak. And thank you for not writing a lemon.

that was so good i wish there was more though

Amu's in ELEMENTARY SCHOOL! She's too young and innocent to do that!

Aw! Poor Yaya!

Aw that's too sweet for its own good! Great story!

WTF? Ikuto stalking her outside the bathroom? Tadase cheating on Yaya? Amu making out with Tadase in the boys' bathroom? what the f* has happened. *calm* great chapter

so cute amuto is the best

amuto 4-ever

:D

What the deuce did I just read! If this doesn't have a happy non-slutty ending... I'm going to KILL you!

Just kidding! But seriously. Were you on crack or something when you wrote this?

AARRGG! amu is supposed to be with Ikuto! he better have a good plan... things are getting too amourus for amu and tadase! poor yaya _

Awe, that was so sweet! i loved that ending!

Ok, so far, you've made Amu a slut, Yaya a sneak, Tadase a cheat, and Ikuto...worse...-_-' I may end up reading the whole thing, but man, you're sick ok? I sincerely hope you don't think real love is how you wrote this, cuz...really, it's not. I know they do this sorta thing in movies and all, but that's cuz it makes for big drama...I'm not trying to randomly bash you, so please take this constructively. If you don't like the comment, well, it's your choice. Sorry.

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OOC?

where's the shugo chara?

thank god its not tadamu..

write more...?