This is really powerful. I love it.

What a oneshot! I've probably read it 3 or 4x. Still, everytime is like the first. I always want more and I always want the baby to miraculously to somehow live. Skye

Yikes. horrific! (I mean the story, not the writing)

Wow, I just read this. Very nice, I like that Shep needed the comfort. This made me think of Kristen9's story, Cold Comfort. Both had a shocky Shep needing help from his team. Well done!

Oh wow... This was so sad. That image of Sheppard on the bench... in the shower... So sad. Thank you for sharing this... realy well done.

Wow - this was so sad - but absolutely amazing!

Excellent fic.

I've been reading your one-shots as you post them, and I've been quite enjoying them. But you really outdid yourself on this one! :D

more more! I'm sure you could mannage another chapter... PLEASE?

Whoa! This was powerful. Thanks.

Wow. Wonderful job. I like the way your wrote John and Teyla, very true to their characters I think. Plus I always like J/T friendship fics. :-)

Intense. Wow. Very good.

That was so sad. Poor John and Teyla...very well written. *sniff*

You are totally spoiling us. And each story is better and better. This one was amazing. You definitely know and love these characters. Thank you so much for sharing all of these with your loving fans...like "me"! God bless you.

That was depressing I must say, but I loved Shep and Teyla's conversation. I would love to see another chapter!

well, that was depressing... lol.