 Kichi Penn 2009-11-08 . chapter 1I was so into it...
...And then I read your author's note.
XD rotflmfao.
No worries, Naruto and Sakura were totally IC. |
 manhattan 2009-07-08 . chapter 1This was beautiful.
Seriously.
Although this pairing is not one of my favorites, it was indescribably the way you intertwined their past together.
Great job. |
 dr. sluice 2008-09-16 . chapter 1Don't eat my fetus! D: |
 magelie 2008-04-30 . chapter 1 So so so so so beautiful, you have made me fall in love with this pairing! |
 Spazztasticle 2008-04-07 . chapter 1Fugakus a bastard :o |
 Miru 2008-03-28 . chapter 1 i don't exactly know how anyone could say Sasuke and Naruto were OOC... i mean it was before the massacre... it was a sad story.. poor Fugaku |
 bb 2008-03-26 . chapter 1 I totally love your portrayal of Kushina! |
 magelie 2008-03-26 . chapter 1 That was really good! Touching and so could-be-canon! Fugaku-Kushina-Minato really reminds of Sasuke-Sakura-Naruto here.
I loved all the unspoken lines in their conversations, that really brought out their relationship. I have no more words now. This piece is just so good!! |
 Kyoshi7989 2008-03-26 . chapter 1This is really unique. I'd never think of the Fugaku/Kushine pairing, and I thought that it was really cool how you did it. I especially liked the part about weeds--it actually made a lot of sense.
But one thing: wasn't Jiraiya the one to come up with the name "Naruto?" It was the main character in his book, right? I dunno. The way you did it worked, too.
And the end fit perfectly. A little bit angsty, but not quite--you can still kinda feel his love for Kushina lingering a bit.
Go FugakuKushina!
--Kyoshi |
 -bell.esque 2008-03-26 . chapter 1OMG, LIKE WTF. Y DID U MAKE NRUTO AND SASKE SO OOC?!
Kidding, kidding.
So don't eat my babies. Though we'll ignore that fact that I have none.
I liked how it turned out. Sort of angst-y and happy at the same time. The story seems to pretty much fit the actual storyline, and it actually COULD be canon, or close to it at least.
I like the last two lines a lot. They're really touching, and it really gives you the idea of how Fugaku keeps Kushina in his mind. |
 Pandastacia 2008-03-25 . chapter 1It's a good thing I don't have any babies... jk! I thought it was really cute, and angsty. Is that even possible...? Anyway, the ending was nice and kawaii and all that jazz. Easy to understand and read. |
 violaqu33n 2008-03-24 . chapter 1...
im sorry
im too busy making out with your story to write a proper review
the wedding is in june
hope you can make it |
 ohsoawesome 2008-03-24 . chapter 1FugakuKushina...?
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Whoah.
Awesome.
XD. |
 electric stars 2008-03-23 . chapter 1SO I THINK I KINDA LOVE YOU FOR THIS.
That was amzing--the last line was my favorite.
You know, this could be true. You never know.
-raises eyebrow-
That was amzingly well ritten, and I think you really captured their eemotions, and personalities.
Pina is lucky to have someone as gifted as you to write this for her. |
 AGENT Kuma-chan 2008-03-23 . chapter 1...HUNT ME DOWN! (Seriously, now I want to have it happen! LET'S SEE YOU FIND ME! ...as I don't have kids (err, too young!), you can have my stuffed animals.)
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It wasn't too angsty, but it still is bittersweet (at least you fail at something most people avoid. I fail at writing light/happy/notsad stories. All I can write are sad.)
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I like how you changed their feelings but kept them the same over time (does that work? pretend it does), and showed how Fugaku coped with Kushina's death.
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and the end was perfect.
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And their conversations? beautiful. Showed their emotions, and their situations (Love, hate, sorrow, EVERYTHING)
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Makes me almost (almost!) hate mikoto/minato for coming in their way.
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I wish I could write as...gracefully/flowing/amazingly PERFECT as you just did this...
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You are making me depressed. *sigh* I think I'll go blow off my envy. |