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Reviews For: Way of the Sword

AnGeLGIrL156
2008-06-22
ch 21,
abusewow thats so cool !
update soon !
jack
2008-06-15
ch 21, anon.
abuseI think it was brilliant your a natural!
Ninja hand
2008-05-02
ch 1,
abusejust to let all you guys know iam writing a sequal no more chapters, so keep your eyes out for 'When blades meet' cheers catcha all later.
Uchiha Yumi 101
2008-05-01
ch 21, anon.
abuseI think that this is a brilliant story and is very well written. Please get the next chapter out as soon as you can
Azar's Curse
2008-03-24
ch 11,
abuseHello,
I finally got round to reading this. You have a good story line going here, and it seems very organised.
There are three things that I saw though:
1. There is a lot of unnecessary detail, which slows the story down, and also bores the reader slightly.
2. There is a lot of repetition, especially with the word 'and'.
3. I've lived in Japan, and some of the reactions aren't really realistic for their culture.

I hope this helps you, and that you continue to write this story,
Curse of Azar
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