Reviews for Death of the Endowed Children

Jelly1029 2008-03-24 ch 4,	abuseWow, that was intense (poor Asa =C gives hug). This isn't bad, but you seem to just be writing on a whim. But as long as you're writing, I suppose. Suggestion: Try not to use caps-lock so much, it tends to only be effective in small amounts. Keep gong though! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it!
ellajaytorsson 2008-03-23 ch 3,	abuseAwesome! Weirrd but awesome! So tell me, how does Emma keep her concentration for so long? I love how Gabriel makes everyone go all agro. Write some more, and I'll keep reviewing. Here's some virtual cookies.
ellajaytorsson 2008-03-22 ch 2,	abuseLET THE BATTLE OF THE ENDOWED BEGIN !! Oh yeah! Now this is my kind of story! Please write heaps more coz it's really interesting so far. I started trying to write a story kind of like this, but it sucked, so here's hoping this one goes well. I love(