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Miamay Tsuikia-Kage no Miam...
2008-06-30
ch 4,
abuseWoo! I'm finally reviewing! Sorry i didn't on the other chappies; I wanted to wait till the last one so you wouldn't have to reply to a million messages. Anyway...

Great story; it had alot of description and I could really feel what the characters (even though they don't belong to you) were feeling and it made me see that you are a very talented writer. Keep up with the great stories and continue doing the writing all of us love!
AGENT KUMA-CHAN
2008-06-30
ch 4,
abuseU.U

You were writing for FAME? FAME?
*FEELS DISAPPOINTED*
...
Actually, *sighs* I wish I COULD do that, but if I did my stories would go nowhere.

...
Ohh...I like how there was no proclamtions of love, but instead it was "You're beautiful". Very Sasuke-esk.
And poor Naru-chan...At least he's happy!
(and if Sasuke said, "I object," it had better have been to a silent room. There is no way he'd yell.)
Good ending (and you managed to keep the same style too.)

SO...any future plans? Hmm?
ViOlEt-KaT
2008-06-30
ch 4,
abuseThe story was awesome. I could tell you paced yourself with this one, despite how short it was. You made me and the others wait and we were patient... well I was patient. I can't speak for anyone else. :) I'd love it if there was a NaruHina one in almost the same context. (hint hint)
Lady Blade WarAngel
2008-06-30
ch 4,
abusehis is a really interesting fic. I quite liked it. Good job.
Annabell Kim
2008-06-29
ch 4,
abuseHa ha ha!
You didn't have to dedicate anything to me!
But thank you anyway!

Ah! A happy ending! This was such a cute story. I love how everything was written. The use of repetition was lovely.

You really do have a knack for writing.
Keep up the excellent work!
starchain
2008-06-29
ch 4,
abuseReally fantastic story! I mean, I hate to see Naruto sad, but that's what he would do, really. What a great fic! And I'm so glad they all figured it out in the nick of time =D

Great job.
lizzpercush
2008-06-29
ch 4,
abuseI really liked your story and was really relieved that there was a happy ending. My I humbly request know that a sort of sequel take place for Naruto and Hinata so those two can get their happy ending and realized they're a match made in heaven?

If you already have one (story of such nature) out, my bad. If you don't, would you please consider it?
TeMaRi - SwEeTeSt SiN
2008-06-29
ch 4,
abuseCute. I loved the ending!
Defining Aerith
2008-06-29
ch 4,
abusePOOR NARUMUFFIN.

BUT YAY SASUCAKES AND SAKUCOOKIE!



FLAIL.
FLAIL.


YAY KATIE GO GO GO.
PrincessLazyPants
2008-06-29
ch 4,
abuseAwe, I love how you gave Konoha's opinion along with the main three and how you started the three's paragraph's about her hair and eyes. It was so original, this story! Absolutely love it, adding it to my favs ^^
nothere
2008-06-29
ch 4, anon.
abuseWOW.
I loved it.
I have tears in my eyes.
I could actually feel the pain they were all going through.
Especially Naruto.
Annabell Kim
2008-06-19
ch 3,
abuseI like this very much.
And FYI, the review count will be 36 once mine is set in :]

For future reference, it would be wise to not set a review goal for your updates. You should be writing not for fame, but because you love writing. I understand getting reviews can be the most exciting thing in the world, but we fans are waiting for an update!

This is your choice though, and as long as you update this story soon, your fans will be happy :]

Keep up the great work! I hope to see a story update email in my inbox soon :D
Defining Aerith
2008-06-15
ch 3,
abuseAw, I was dedi-dic-dicated. Lol.
Hee-hee, lovely. Sasuke, go get her you undeserving **!
Oh, check out me and ANGELforSHOW's story when you're not busy, okay? I'd love to hear from you.
Oh, and btw, this chapter is my favorite.
The whole Naruto thing made me cry. Argh, why him?!
icecandy74
2008-06-13
ch 3,
abuseomg update !! update!!
AubergineDream
2008-06-11
ch 3,
abusei believe this is review #33! please update soon! i love where this story is going!
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