Reviews for Neon Genesis Armored Core

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Lost Maelstrom 2008-07-20 ch 8,	abuseI like this very much, please continue soon.
The Demonic Fox 2008-06-23 ch 1,	abuseYou need to get a new chapter up soon. Otherwise, I'll have to find a trolley for Jolt to beat you with. Especially because this is the best Armored Core fanfic I've read so far. At least three times as good as mine.
nick2951 2008-05-31 ch 8,	abuseWell that was a great couple of chapters! I look forward to your explanation about Rei, update soon!
The Evil Sound Ninja 2008-05-27 ch 3,	abusei might not understand much about politics, but he knew the importance of appearances. When possible enemies viewed you as stronger than them, they would think twice before attacking. When they feared you, you had already won half the battle.
The Evil Sound Ninja 2008-05-27 ch 2,	abuseThe pain of one, and the desire to destroy all
The Evil Sound Ninja 2008-05-27 ch 1,	abuseNeon Genesis Armored Core? BRILLIANT!
Razgrizblaze1 2008-05-19 ch 6,	abuseWell well, i it isn't another Armored Core/Evangelion crossover. I've already read quoth the raven and was hopeing another one of these would pop up. Oh, did I forget my manners, let me introduce myself in proper. Linx: Blaze Next: Sul (Nexts and Armored Cores exist in the same game, but there are MAJOR differences between the two. I'd be wiling to explain, but not here.) The Bad: This story doesn't have many noticable flaws. Grammar glitches are few, but could stand to be combed over. Chapter length is semi-short, but as long as the story itself remains long, I don't have a problem with that. Oh, and the smexy image of Shinji Ikari was overdone long ago, so don't overdue it! The Good: Your story is very entertaining to read and doesn't butcher the whole Evangelion storyline. You're right for trying to stay true to the formula, and the filler parts have their share of entertainment value. There's plenty more to be had, and with moral dilemas abound as well as oblivious reunions and general knuckleheadedness abound, there's no telling what could happen in the near future. My only hope is that you don't stray so far off the path that we end up with a nonsensicle story that shouldn't even exist, but I think you're avoiding that problem pretty well. Conclusion: I can't tell much right from the start, so expect another review from me after a few more chapters. Than I can start the lecturing process on what makes your story tick and what you can do to improve on that. So far, you've created a strong foundation on which a story can be crafted, and with enough blanks left to create a canyon, there's much more to expect from you. Until than, I'll be reading. -Blaze (On a more personal note, maybe Shinji should get to pilot a next. Heh, his experience with Eva would give him enough AMS compatibility to control it like a second skin. If you don't know what a next is, I'd be more than happy to give you a rundown, but in my opinion they're more superior to Armored Cores-or as Next pilots call them, 'Normals'. Just a thought though, you can disregard this part of the message if you wish.)
Shinji Ikari01 2008-04-05 ch 6,	abuseand here i though my Quote the Raven was the only Eva/AC crossover fic floating around. fairly nice work, easy to read and on a plus it has section dividers! Do me a favor, go check mine out and see what you think, its under revision right now and should have the next chapter ready soon
Dookie Overlord 2008-04-03 ch 3,	abuseCool deal, I love this cross-over combo.
nick2951 2008-04-03 ch 6,	abuseWell this fic keeps getting better and better! I look forward to when the pilots have a real reunion; I am curious to why Rei thinks Shinji is dead. I also look forward to the coming war between Gendo and Keel. Update soon!
SSJ-Jolt 2008-04-03 ch 6,	abuseNice! And if you give up on this I'll hunt you down and beat you with a trolley!
veteran Raven 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abusevery interesting i'm very fond of evangelion but i've been watching cuz i started it awhile bak and i'm just gonna finish it but this is nice i'm guessing we might see those evas coming bak eh? the evangelion characters r tru to the anime keep it up
SSJ-Jolt 2008-03-27 ch 5,	abuseAwesome, though you made a few grammer errors and missed what the 'entire' was on Asuka. Hmm... will Asuka and the White Comet duo be going on a mission soon?
nick2951 2008-03-27 ch 5,	abuseThis is getting good; you have me hooked and I look forward to you next update.
SSJ-Jolt 2008-03-26 ch 4,	abuseLol... I just noticed some paralels to Evangalion Jolt = Asuka Steg = Shinji Asuka = Misato Also so you know working together Jolt and Steg can handle thier AC as if it where an AC from AC4, you know, Quick boosts, firing back cannons without kneeling. Also the 'White Comet' nickname comes from the white colour of thier boosters and mainly from the Over boost. Most opponents don't realize 'White Comet' actually is a joint callsign used by Jolt and Steg.

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