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| Sac-a-puce 2008-07-01 ch 10, | abuseLoved this. They both know their tea and the art of sparring verbally. |
| Funky In Fishnet 2008-06-25 ch 10, | abuseAwesome, you write both Emma and Steed really well. I like how you build their characters and we see where Mrs Peel came from before the Ministry employed her. Keep it up :- ) |
| ClaudiaH 2008-06-24 ch 10, | abuseLoving this so far... a wonderful portrayal of what exactly could be going on in Emmas head. And I love that its not a love at first sight thing. I've always thought she was far to practical for that! Please continue - this is great |
| kst1233 2008-05-24 ch 9, | abuseAnd it just keeps getting better and better. |
| Galeforce 2008-05-21 ch 8, anon. | abuseWa-ell...this is what happens when you haven't worked on a story for a long time. I came back to work on Chapter 8 and added a bit more before deciding it was ready to upload, then decided to upload it - when I saw that I'd *already* uploaded Chapter 8. Well, now it's got a few new hundred words! and I hope to have Chapter 9 finished soon. |
| ermintrude421 2008-05-02 ch 8, | abuseThis is good. I especially like how you've gotten into her head, without sentimentality or getting maudlin. Looking forward to more. |
| Sac-a-puce 2008-04-13 ch 8, | abuseLovely build-up of the suspense... I like your use of exotic influences on Emma's childhood. It adds layers her character. Like everyone else, I am very much looking forward to a few more chapters! |
| Mia 2008-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseIndeed, we can't have to many first meeting stories. I have always thought that Emma would actually be fascinated by automation, so I'm delighted that you've used that notion. I'm enjoying Emma as a budding spy, and am only disappointed that it stops at chapter 8! |
| kst1233 2008-03-29 ch 8, | abuseLoved the video! This is going to be fun. And I'm glad this story is going to be long. I love good long stories that keep me interested in coming back time and again, waiting eagerly for each new chapter. |
| Gale Force 2008-03-28 ch 8, | abuseHopefully I won't get into trouble if I put in a plug for another story I've started working on... it's a *video* fan fiction novel and I've uploaded the first chapter at You Tube, and will be doing a chapter a week. It's called Let's Get Avengerous. doesn't allow URLS here, so just go to YouTube and do a search on that title, if you're interested... Hope you're enjoying this story...my plan is that it's going to last for a long time but hopefully you'll keep coming back for each chapter... |
| BitShifter 2008-03-27 ch 7, | abuseThe thing I like most about this first meeting is the fact that for some time, Emma doesn't know Steed's name; she only knows him as "the false Patrick Staunton." Most of the other first meeting stories have him instantly giving his name and Emma succumbing to his charms. Given the Steed from the 1963-65 era, it seems much more likely she would be introduced to his "sneaky side" first--maybe Steed would even try to "use" her (rather than woo her). I've always felt that the first meeting really should be adversarial rather than cordial, so that we can see sparks flying from day one. |
| BitShifter 2008-03-25 ch 4, | abuseVery canonically correct, with the horoscope and the fender-bender. You've escalated it nicely with Emma's indentity mistake about Steed. There are some good mysteries going. |
| kst123 2008-03-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseI've always had my own theories on the JS/EP first meeting, most of which has been born out of reading other's thoughts of how it happened. I'm eagerly waiting to see what you come up with. |