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| bookworm45 2008-05-03 ch 1,  | abuseNicely done. |
| TessaStarDean 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseLovely :) Some of the sentences were a little awkward - for instance, Flack saying "I do not thin you're weak, Stella." He's a contraction kind of man, so it seemed to stumble a little bit. But I really do like how you showed how caring he is and how much Stella means to him. Well done :) |
| KickassScot 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cool. |