This is great. I listened to the Finale as I read and your descriptions are perfect ^^

this story is beautifully written. yes i know soudns disturbing but it is true keep up the good work

...I really don't know what to say. This was beautiful...I am actually lost for words right now. The emotion portrayed by all 3 characters was so pure and real and i love how with so little words you can create imagery and emotions with such strength. I would do anything to be even half as good as you are.

That was very well written! I love it! ^__^

This was very well done. I like the details you added such as Mrs. Lovett's thoughts where she actually thinks for a moment that she's been forgiven. The part about the actual Benjamin Barker resurfacing only to be replaced again by Sweeney Todd was great too. Very good fic, it's great to read something in Toby's POV. Great work!

Great. :-) Love seeing Tobyfic. I really like the additions you've made, especially Mrs Lovett thinking that she is Sweeney's salvation, and the lines describing Toby's mind cracking ('A tiny smile, a laugh bubbling in his belly' and 'warm, metallic blood pooled in Toby’s mouth as his teeth punctured his lip').

Beautiful.

ah! loved it. the ending is so sad in the movie and in your fic. nice job.