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vampirekakurine
2008-07-21
ch 1,
abusethis story was so awesome! (pulls out tissue)
NarUt0'z Wiif3Y
2008-07-15
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful, I loved it! I completely did.
krissy
2008-07-07
ch 1, anon.
abusethat is so freaking confusing none of it makes sence im sorry
lanie-chan
2008-06-23
ch 1,
abuseAGH!
I absolutely loved it!
This was so, wonderfully, perfectly awesome!
ANGELforSHOW
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseI read this a while ago (like way back in March) when Annie's challenge was around, but I never commented on it. 'Cause I'm a bad person who forgets a lot of things.

But I reread it recently, and I fell in love with it all over again. You worked in the prompts exceptionally well, and this paragraph:

"In room number 38 on the seventh floor of the swankiest hotel in town, a broken boy was singing the only song he’d ever written, and the only one he never sang for money. Sometime the polluted orange moonlight flashed over the scars on his wrists, and sometimes a tear would slip from the lost girl’s closed eyes, but there was a quiet understanding between them, and a secret fire burned in each."

made my heart crumble. Uh, in a good way though.

I doubt this review was any help, because I'm sure saying "Dear Ren, I'm jealous. Your writing makes me happy. Love, Iz." is probably the same.

But whatEVER, 'cause you made me babble, and that's always a good thing. (:

The point is, I loved it. And I hope I see more askdajWONDERFUL things from you in the future.
Drifting Warrior
2008-06-07
ch 1,
abuseThat was beautiful! It was so honest and real, yet romantic at the same time. I offer you congradulations (tainted by just a little bit of envy, XD)! The story captured Sasuke really well...
crystal teardrops
2008-05-26
ch 1,
abuseWow, this was so beautiful, I don't even know what to say. It was just-sincere.
kerrance.
2008-05-23
ch 1,
abuseReally nice.

Is that a real song?

The lyrics are amazing, anyway.
Ace toes-that-jam
2008-05-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseI caught the michael jackson reference (...and the nose fell off!
) AND ALL THEPROMPTS.

caps lock. because you deserve it. :D
Sakuraangel1327
2008-05-10
ch 1,
abuseu no, that reminds me of the manga: Love Celeb
cutecrazyice
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseSo cute!
SunnyHinata
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseHaha, wow, this is just made of awesome. Seriously. It had an awesome blend of comedy and romance. Again, another slice of Real Life Pie.
Darkness
2008-04-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseI have only 1 thing to say... Wow.
I also have something else to say...I loved the whole Orochimaru black turned white thing. XD that was funny. :)
okay, now I'm done. :D
sakura of the konoha
2008-04-25
ch 1, anon.
abusecool story
Odat
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abuseThat was so sweet. I'm almost left speechless, but that wouldn't be much of a review would it? The box, oh the box! That was so adorable! And the clumsiness of the kisses! AW! Oh my gosh! Well done. And the prompts are hilarious.
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