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| spootycup 2008-08-06 ch 3,  | abuseThis is good... poor dean.. heck poor sam.. 7 years... no wonder why he asked sam what took so long... ok you totally have to continue... poor dean... man poor dean! |
| kirallie 2008-07-20 ch 3, | abusePoor Dean! Wish there was more! Who was possessing Bobby? |
| Rowey 2008-07-04 ch 3, anon. | abusei think its great!! it may just be my obession for dean talking but i love it and i think u should keep righting i really wnat 2 kno wat happens nxt!! |
| EmmelleN 2008-07-04 ch 3, | abuseEagerly looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Winterheart 2008-06-16 ch 3, | abuseYes I like it and yes I want more!! ;-) I think this is a wonderful take on the ending and new beginning even though it pulls at the heart strings to see how battered and altered Dean has become from his ordeal. I think you're off to a great start. You're already giving us hints on how the relationship between Dean and Sam has changed. I'm very eager to see where you take this. Please write more soon! |
| Winterheart 2008-06-16 ch 2, | abuseAh! I love it! So, I'm really curious: is the mysterious being that "possesses" Bobby truly benevolent? I was telling Crimson the other night that I've noticed that the Series has yet to introduce a character or being that perhaps has some ties to the Light. I don't really consider the Trickster to be "good" because while he is trying to teach people a lesson for their own good, he does still kill on occasion. So is your character an Angel? God, Himself? Or some other celestial being? I must read on to (hopefully) find out. |
| Winterheart 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseOh my Gosh! You have me crying already!! I find this a nice (if "nice" is truly the word to use...) alternative to the rather violent ending in the series. I can't wait to read more! |
| FeistyFeral 2008-06-16 ch 3, | abuseHello there, I'm sorry it's taken me forever to review this chapter, but here it goes: Dean didn’t have nightmares and if he did, the most they ever wrenched out of him was a grunt. So Sam was disoriented, his mind heavy and sluggish with sleep. Was he dreaming? Dreaming of Dean in Hell? No. Dean wasn’t in Hell. Dean was here. Dean was screaming!-- |
| parisindy 2008-06-16 ch 3, | abuseOh man this is totally Fab! more please! |
| smee13 2008-06-16 ch 3, | abuseyes please continue. im really interested in this! its really good so far. |
| gengen0776 2008-06-15 ch 3, | abusePoor Dean! I know that a lot of shows have suggested that time passes differently in Hell...so it really does make sense that one week would seen like years to Dean. Seriously you write hurt Dean so damn well! I really just want to pull him into a great big hug and hold him until he stops shivering! Definitely continue please! I didn't think it was slow at all...nice build up to the "seven years" revelation! Keep it up amazon sista! Gen |
| GotTheShining 2008-06-15 ch 3, | abuseYou didn't like it?! I thought it was great! Yes, there are a lot of NRFTW codas out there but this is one of the few that has Dean still being Dean. Need to enjoy it while it lasts cause it sounds like Kripke's not going to be as kind to Dean... |
| V956970 2008-06-15 ch 2, | abuseI love it! |
| MontyPythonFan 2008-06-15 ch 3, | abuseOh you absolute freaking legend! :-D LOVE that this was updated, I so hoped it would be! Jess x |
| babyreaper 2008-06-14 ch 3, | abuseThat was a shock, big time difference there no wonder he's freaked. Great story really enjoying it, I'm a bid Dean fan, awful to think of him in Hell(how could EK send him there) |