Wow, you should write some more little stories as one in the morning!
Cute and cuddly, great job.

I read this twice and boy it's good. Really good. Great even. I enjoy it, makes me feel for them and makes me want to write.

You nailed it. Thats what we need. More cudling!!

beautiful

Cute and adorable! Especially great for a 1:00 AM drabble!

Aw! I don't know if that's the tone you were going for, but...aw! I love it! And, I agree--pretty great for something done at 1:00. I hate it when those darned ideas sneak up on us at the oddest and least conveinent of times, don't you? Suggestion--check over the story when it's in Documents...sometimes FF mixes up the terms and such, like with what happened to the author's note. In short, nice! Loved the emotion. :)
~Hadley (and Marie!)

This is surprisingly good for a 1:00 a.m. doodle.
Watch your phrasing ...
You need practice, but I see talent peeking outCool!
Bets;)