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| oreostar90 2008-07-22 ch 4,  | abuseAww, I feel a bit bad for Naruto and Hinata...but I can't wait for HinaSasu moments >:D I like the idea of Hinata taking over as a spokesperson of some sort for the company...keep writing! I love this story more and more! Thank you! |
| harley944 2008-07-17 ch 4, | abuseaw poor hinata |
| Vampiress22 2008-07-17 ch 4, | abuseNo, please don't stop. I love this fanfic, and I know there are so many other readers which do too. I can wait for the next chapter, but please do continue. This is really interesting and it deserves so much more credit than that. It has a clever plot, the characters are portrayed perfectly, and I don't know what more to say. I really think you should continue! I can wait! |
| Vampiress22 2008-07-17 ch 3, | abuse'She mentally sighed and thought Sasuke better be paying me double for this.' Oh my, I really like Ino's character in this fanfic. Great job! The ending of the chapter was wonderful as well! |
| Vampiress22 2008-07-17 ch 2, | abuse“Congratulations on your engagement, when were you gonna tell me?” A tiny hint of hurt was noted. (Poor Naruto...) “He killed mom…I’m not going to let him kill me too” (That line ended it perfectly, just great!) - This was an interesting chapter. I really do like it a lot! NEED...TO...READ...MORE! |
| Vampiress22 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot. Great description of the setting, by the way. It really drew me into it. I really want to see where you are going with this, so I am definitely going to read more! Great job! |
| bb 2008-07-17 ch 4, anon. | abusePlz update soon! plz and make the caters longe I really like it! |
| Bitter-Blood-Sacrifice 2008-07-17 ch 4, | abusePlease do update . You might loose interest but i am not so keep upt he good work please. |
| HeartBrokenHinata 2008-07-16 ch 4, | abuseOMG poor Hinata |
| cutexxlalaxx 2008-07-16 ch 4, | abusenice story ^^ |
| winterkaguya 2008-07-16 ch 4, | abusevery interesting story and plot!! and i'm very curious as to what sasuke is going to do next...and poor naruto...but i guess eventually its going to be a naruino is tat it?? i find them okay pairing and you write pretty well... well, i hope you won't lose interest in this story since its very well written... update soon ya! |
| MoonLightView 2008-07-16 ch 2, | abuseawesome story |
| blackraven615 2008-07-16 ch 4, | abuseNo! This is a good story. I like reading this. Update when you can please. Wonderful chapter. |
| SHeWithNoName 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abuseoh. my. freakin. god. DID HE JUST DO THAT?? |
| Addicted.x 2008-07-01 ch 3, | abuseoh... wow... I didn't see that coming... I |