There are some really large gaps in this story, I still like it, but it would be nice to read the whole thing.

YAAAAAY! Loooooooovvvvveeeee...

I *love* how this is coming together.

"Ereh'w eht kerf era ew won?"
Where the fcuk are we now?
Friggin lol. Dude, I love you. :L

I loved this! is there more?

I enjoyed reading this story! 10 out of 10 stars. (I look forward to reading the sequel!)

Evil!

I'm in the process of reading your story. I love the fact that you've included snippets of the Gallafrien language in it. Is there any chance of including a glossary of it at the end?

Okay, seriously, what the heak is the native language? what are they saying?

Oooh... you have to write more... please!

I need a happy ending :-)

Love all the ideas in this story... very complex but you pulled it off...

Fantastic

Mags

I can read his language, Nheheheh

and im only on the first chapter!

MORE TIMELORD LANUGAGE I HOPE!

-giggles-

kay still reading...

hold on.

Flyxoxo

Yes, I could just wait til the end to review (10 characters would be enough, one would think), but I am too afraid of forgetting stuff. It also helps draw out the anticipation ;-)

First, I forgot to mention in my last review that I absolutely loved how then Doctor simply refers to Rose as his mate. No "real" angst associated with it, it just is.

Ch 10-Second, are the twins still living in the rift room? There was another story on FFNet where Rose was allergic to the universe - could be a similar theme? (shut up, celtangel, read the dang story!)

So, is Rose immortal? Or has Thera crossed her own timeline?

Ch 12-Call me silly, but I never put Jack and the Face of Boe together until this episode. Now I have to go back and watch the old eps!

Ch13-is this before or after the Sarah Jane Chronicles with Mr Smith? I honestly don't remember what happened to him in the end.

Oh dear god, I love Doctor Who and all the possibilites that go along with it.

(the story is old enough I feel comfortable with spoilers) Thera as both the Doctor's childhood playmate AND daughter? I've read a lot of stories, but this one...wow. Looking back at orecupis chapters, it seems so obvious. I love how you tied in vague hints before.

I know I've been spamming with reviews, but sometimes chapters just need their own spot. Onward reading!

Remember the end of Doomsday when Rose mentions Jackie's pregnancy, the Doctor wonders if Rose was, and Rose says she isn't? An added fractional second pause before Rose answers could make this scene entirely possible.

This story keeps getting better by the chapter! What will the Doctor do when he gears from Jack?

Considering the Doctor's real age - I believe he is really much older than even 1300 years.

Forgive me for an appalling lack of details, but I got this from a Youtube clip a couple months ago. In (what I believe was) the Three Doctors episode, One starts blustering "I've been doing this for thousa..." and he gets cut off.

With all the funny business with regeneration, I sometimes wonder if the Doctor even knows how old he actually is.

(great story so far! Read the first chapter ages back and then never went back. Glad I did this time!)