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bloomsky
2009-03-07 . chapter 2
more more more more
another-vampire
2009-02-17 . chapter 2
cool write more!
TeamButlerx3
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
That was so amazingg.
Youu are suchh a great writer.
Rosalie && Emmett are my most favorite couple.
And I hope people see that Rosalie isn't a horrible person,
I hope they see that she lost something she can never gain.
Really,I hate it when people say bad things about her.
Great Job.Youu shouldd totally do more!
Tia Jasmin
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
Aw, this was so sweet. lol, i could only imagine Rosalie's face when Emmett suggested turning a child!
DramaticField
2008-08-08 . chapter 2
Ohmygosh ! I love this story ! You have have have to write more ! =]
Angeliss
2008-07-28 . chapter 2
Is the story on hiatus? Because you haven't updated for four months, almost five.

I loved the first chapter. As a oneshot, it would be on my favorites. It has everything that I could want from A Rosalie and Emmett fluffy Hurt/Comfort fic, which I am rather addicted to. I loved the beginning of the second chapter, with Charlie and Emmett in the park- it was very sweet.

But then... How do I say this? I didn't particularly like the plot twist. It happened so fast, and I just don't find myself believing it. I don't think Sam would beg so fast, and I definitely don't think Carlisle would make a decision that quickly. If this is on hiatus, I recommend you cut that part, and then just do a fluffy little RosalieEmmett ending. If not, I would recommend you update.

I don't fault your characterization, more your pacing and the thought processes of certain characters are more... abbreviated is close, but not the word I am looking for. What you wrote is in character, all things they would think. I'm just not sure that everything they would think of was there. Particularly Carlisle.

But I did enjoy it- don't get me wrong. It's just a matter of preference.
S. Cullen
2008-07-17 . chapter 1
I really love this story will you ever update?
RosalieCullen
2008-06-12 . chapter 2
Great story I really like it. Please update soon.
just drifting
2008-06-01 . chapter 2
this is a really beautiful story, thanks for writing it. i love rosalie and this story portrays her really well. PLEASE UPDATE SOON :)
lumoslumiere
2008-04-18 . chapter 2
Oh, my! I ADORE this story! Please update soon, I can't wait to read more! :D
adrienne.hope
2008-04-15 . chapter 2
...Do you ever plan on updating?
bs18edwardz1truluv
2008-04-07 . chapter 1
I love the idea of your story, and I really like what I've read so far. Keep it coming!
beachbumyeahh
2008-04-01 . chapter 2
I feel so bad for Rosalie. Update soon?
Mariam Hiwatari
2008-03-28 . chapter 2
I love Rose very much... :) keep it up!
roseuley819
2008-03-27 . chapter 2
holy **! totally DID NOT see that coming! :O *gasp gasp* I'm glad that she was saved...but not sure i'm happy she's a vampire? its good though! BUT SO MANY EMOTIONS!! Haha :P
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