 bloomsky 2009-03-07 . chapter 2more more more more |
 another-vampire 2009-02-17 . chapter 2cool write more! |
 TeamButlerx3 2008-10-18 . chapter 1That was so amazingg.
Youu are suchh a great writer.
Rosalie && Emmett are my most favorite couple.
And I hope people see that Rosalie isn't a horrible person,
I hope they see that she lost something she can never gain.
Really,I hate it when people say bad things about her.
Great Job.Youu shouldd totally do more! |
 Tia Jasmin 2008-10-11 . chapter 1Aw, this was so sweet. lol, i could only imagine Rosalie's face when Emmett suggested turning a child! |
 DramaticField 2008-08-08 . chapter 2Ohmygosh ! I love this story ! You have have have to write more ! =] |
 Angeliss 2008-07-28 . chapter 2Is the story on hiatus? Because you haven't updated for four months, almost five.
I loved the first chapter. As a oneshot, it would be on my favorites. It has everything that I could want from A Rosalie and Emmett fluffy Hurt/Comfort fic, which I am rather addicted to. I loved the beginning of the second chapter, with Charlie and Emmett in the park- it was very sweet.
But then... How do I say this? I didn't particularly like the plot twist. It happened so fast, and I just don't find myself believing it. I don't think Sam would beg so fast, and I definitely don't think Carlisle would make a decision that quickly. If this is on hiatus, I recommend you cut that part, and then just do a fluffy little RosalieEmmett ending. If not, I would recommend you update.
I don't fault your characterization, more your pacing and the thought processes of certain characters are more... abbreviated is close, but not the word I am looking for. What you wrote is in character, all things they would think. I'm just not sure that everything they would think of was there. Particularly Carlisle.
But I did enjoy it- don't get me wrong. It's just a matter of preference. |
 S. Cullen 2008-07-17 . chapter 1 I really love this story will you ever update? |
 RosalieCullen 2008-06-12 . chapter 2Great story I really like it. Please update soon. |
 just drifting 2008-06-01 . chapter 2this is a really beautiful story, thanks for writing it. i love rosalie and this story portrays her really well. PLEASE UPDATE SOON :) |
 lumoslumiere 2008-04-18 . chapter 2Oh, my! I ADORE this story! Please update soon, I can't wait to read more! :D |
 adrienne.hope 2008-04-15 . chapter 2...Do you ever plan on updating? |
 bs18edwardz1truluv 2008-04-07 . chapter 1I love the idea of your story, and I really like what I've read so far. Keep it coming! |
 beachbumyeahh 2008-04-01 . chapter 2I feel so bad for Rosalie. Update soon? |
 Mariam Hiwatari 2008-03-28 . chapter 2I love Rose very much... :) keep it up! |
 roseuley819 2008-03-27 . chapter 2holy **! totally DID NOT see that coming! :O *gasp gasp* I'm glad that she was saved...but not sure i'm happy she's a vampire? its good though! BUT SO MANY EMOTIONS!! Haha :P |