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sissyHIYAH 3/30/09 . chapter 1
Oh, this is just too sad, but then kind of hopeful, then all sad again...then hopeful again and now I'm THIS CLOSE to turning into a big blubbering idiot at my desk. If I get weird looks from my co-workers, I'm blaming you!

This is fantastic. The humid April weather, the humdrum of everyday life and poor neglected Tifa...

Your descriptions and imagery are very, very effective and the note to Cloud is just...well, it's just perfect.

God, I love this.

("World's best caregiver and ass-kicker"-I agree with you. Tifa doesn't get nearly enough credit for her frickin' awesome Tifa-ness.)
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