Lovely... I can't really say much, this is my first time reading an Artemis Fowl Fanfiction, but in my eyes it was v. good. Blue

wth?

I like it! Honestly, I think Holly and Artemis is just wrong. :-P But come on, Artemis had his first lengthly conversation with a girl his age in the 5th book. And that was Minerva. Did I sense a hint hint there! (haha!)

it's okay but a little shorter than i'm used 2

i mean a lot longer

Good job with this. I really enjoyed reading the drabble for a couple of reasons. Perhaps the biggest reason was that I really felt as though the piece came from Minerva's actual mind. It contained her drive and determination to win and be the best. It showed how she truly liked Artemis, but also how she hadn't completely grown out of her superiority complex. The second reason I liked this was because I couldn't find anything to correct you on, spelling or grammar wise. Really good job!

Katie

bah

I like Holly and Arty way more than Minerva. In fact I forgot who she was until yesterday. She didn't even cross my mind when I read The Time Paradox.

Anyway.

This was good for only 100 words, but I think it seems like Minerva only sees Artemis as a challenge and doesn't actually have that much feeling towards him so I love it hahaha.

As long as Minerva comes across as shallow and it's not concert Minerva and Artemis shipping. After all, we don't hear from Arty here, we only see what Minerva is thinking.

Yes. Well anyway, good job!

EVIE!It's Taylor.. anyways just wanted to say hi...

A2S ROCK!

finally some artemis and minerva. i looked in the character thingy and i couldn't find her extremely annoying and great story for a hundred words

I liked it. Simple but it worked very well to describe Minerva's feelings, and while it was vaguely romantic, she sounded as though she were more interested in his mind than his body, which is perfect for what it is.

That was a nice drabble; in just 100 words you were able to depict when in the series this occurs, who is speaking, and who is being spoken about. Minerva is in character, and though I'm not very fond of this pairing, it was neatly written. I must say I enjoyed it, though it was really short; it gives some good insight into the character.

it SHIT

too short

Wow, that was fantastic! You really got into Minervas head.