Aww... Donnie is a great teacher! XD

Loved it -^^-

Good story. Well written, and I love the ending.

Fabulous story; I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, especially since it was from a perspective of a young Foot member. :-) Very nice-- especially the ending! ^.^

Thought it about time I caught up on some reading, and then rightfully kicked myself for not reading this one sooner. Loved it. Loved the way each of the first three chapters involved Don and a different one of his brothers. Loved the way Jun finally managed to 'come of age' (I ** off my hubbie by almost missing dinner I found it so difficult to tear myself away from reading that bit, grinning like a loon all the while). And I can see why you're gonna miss writing about these kids. I certainly won't complain if they do manage to crop up again.

Thanks again for another wonderful read.

There are no words to describe how awesome this was. I loved it! Jun was such a treat to read, I love him. XD "Jun was Here" - haha!

Instant fave. Great work!:)

Perfect. Perfect line, perfect coup, prefect ending. Absolutely Perfect. :D:D:D

“Why not? YOU have Karai. Why can’t I have this one? I mean, yes, he’s young and inexperienced and pretty puny-- he’s not too bright, or else he would have taken the last two hints, though you have to give him credit for determination. He’s unskilled beyond belief, though he has the drive. I guess you could say he’s a starter homicidal maniac stalker.”

Oh, that line was too funny.

But, overall, there were many lines of 'funny' and some were just down right poignant.

Nevertheless, you have outdone yourself, my dear Cynlee! This has to be the best of your efforts, not that any of what you've written previously couldn't be labeled 'best', because most if not all of your works are the best of anything on this wonderful site.

And I did say that I would be giving up Fan Fiction, but I had to finish this story first. And I'm glad I did. Seriously, a brilliant bit of writing and an equally brilliant plot and storyline. One that is definitely different by far from anything that I've read in a very long time!

Best OC for 2008 will most likely be another win for you in the fan fic comp. If you don't get it, then I'll be shocked.

Wonderful work!

Be blessed,
Rene'

This is a great story, but you need to remove the 'Donatello/OC' from the summary. Authors put that when there's a romantic pairing, and there obviously is not one in this story. (Thank goodness!)

Hahaha! That was great. A POST-IT note! That was terrific. I do hope we get to see Jun and the other three in a separate story sometime they seem like interesting and like able characters.

Awesome story! I love how it ended... It seems Jun got the last laugh after all!

WOW! This chapter was amazing! A fantastic ending to a great story! Thank you so much for posting!

ROTFL! A post-it note! LOLOL

Nice! When I read the summary, it said Donatello/O.C., which indicates a pairing. Then I found out it was a dude, and thought it was going to be a slash story, but thankfully, you proved me wrong!! It was awesome! Keep it up!

Deu Sa!

COOL! He did it! AWESOME! Great job!^^

Awesome chapter, Cyn. Sorry I didn't review it sooner. I loved the part where Raph and Don talk about Mikey's version of the coup stick. Well, it looks like Jun has met Leo and he's not gonna come out looking good either. Please update soon. You are a shelltastic writer.

The Bubbly One,
Shell