Argh another amazing chapter but ending with a damn cliffhanger is so evil, i NEED to know whats going to happen lol, man your story is getting better and better, i really dont know what will happen once Harry leaves the protection of the Summer Court, or if he leaves it at all. Its hard to really predict whats going to happen, its what makes your story so good.

Anyway, i hope you update soon, since i really really need to know whats going on lol

- Xadro

i like it :D

Did he try to just summon the objects with his magic? I didn't see it anywhere.

This is good. I think that it's my favorite of the various Dresden/Potter crossovers that I've been able to find.

Reminds me very much of Jim Butcher's style in certain sections, well thought out descriptions of the how differing types of magic systems work. That's something he does in his novels that I love - the technical details (and good action scenes).

Awesome molding once again.

Great story, keep it up

great

Oh boy, just when things didn't need to go more wrong, they do, and can not imagine this will be fun after all is said and done on both sides, that and Harry will be struggling to get back to his own place as well, and wonder if Aurora will want him to leave or not, even as she may be under orders.

Pretty good! I'm fairly curious about this Exilé stuff...

OOh, the thick plottens...

Good job on making people wonder how much truth there was in the the demon's words. Good lies are made of inconsequential truths after all.

Divine power in Harry? That I did not see coming. Although I'm kinda confused, if he's got Divine power, then why would a deamon offer to train him in it, or does it become Infernal power then? I'm not very up to date with the Dresden universe.

I'm betting it was old Moldiewart who broke the circle.

Interesting, a bit off a cliffhanger in the end. Hope to see a another chapter soon.

The entire first half of your chapter was Aurora looking sexy and Harry crushing like and idiot. 'Oh, I don't know if she's trying to seduce me'
Its perfectly obvious what she's trying to do and it should put him on guard. He's absolutely trusting and foolish, unrealistically so. Its like he has NO CUNNING. none. No self preservation instinct or even the inherent distrust everyone feels once in a while. Its stupid.

Also, this:

"Harry quickly weighed pros and cons in his mind. If he accepted the gift, he would get a nifty faerie mail, but end up in even more debt. Still, it would be just a drop in the ocean compared to what he already owed and he wasn't even sure if the debt really affected him in any magical way..." - Your Harry might as well be brain dead.

What happened? Is Harry going to be taken by Sakhr to be trained in the darker arts? Interesting chapter as always, I love this story. Aurora does seem like she is really huma compared to the rest of her kind. Update soon.

Another superb chapter that leaves the audience (myself included) hungry for more. For instance, I enjoy the characterization of the Harry/Aurora relationship in that you are able to include the innuendo, but without actual sexual content.

The demon summoning and introduction of the knights of the cross was.. a bit odd. Mainly because I had assumed the summoning was being performed in the Nevernever and from what I think I know, the knights are generally incapable of magic allowing them to travel back and forth. Perhaps I just misread that part.

And lastly, I think the amount of time spent describing how Harry put on the clothing and armor, and precisely what he was putting on, was a bit overdone.

All in all, depressingly short but with a tantalizing aftertaste. I look forward to your future works.