This is one of my favorite stories. Its a really unique analogy I wouldn't have thought of. :)

-makes strangled noise in throat-

I...

-breaks down into sobs-

Um...

-blows nose and wipes away tears-

I liked it very much.

who is who and wat is happening

I'm here! *glances about the nearly empty reveiw room* Hm. I need a place to sit. *conjures a comfy rocking chair and sits* Now...

*sniff* This was rather depressing... and I don't think Artemis would contemplate suicide, but this was rather well-written and other than that, he was beleiveably in character. I love the idea of owning the sun as well as the knife metaphor. :)
If it were possible to give three catagories, I would definately go with angst/tragedy/romance.

All in all, very nice. Another well-written piece, especially with this being your first attempt at writing angst. I must say it was both very angsty and insightful. Well done; I enjoyed it. (Even though it was rather depressing.)

Hope that helps! ^_^

Great until the end...It seems slightly OOC to me to have someone as intelligent as Artemis commit suicide...but perhaps you meant for it to be that way. Lovely bit of prose in any case.

nice! I love Drama!!

I loved the angst, but the subtle suicide was almost missed... Well, I did miss it the first time. It was also a bit short, but this may just be me...

Good job!

I love this lots =] It's so pretty. The idea that he wants to own everything is so like him, and comparing Holly to the sun is lovely in more than one way =]

Great job!