Very sweet. It made me smile.

very well done but I caught a couple of errors:

1)"When I've heard one very heated fight between you and your father"

a better way to say it would probably be

"Then I heard one very heated fight between you and your father"

2)"That's what you have been arguing with your father that night when I left."

maybe instead

"That's what you had been arguing with your father that night when I left."

I know, small mistakes but I've been taken to town by way harsher people for smaller

Rizdaer's romance was really sweet, wasn't it?

I really like how you got his viewpoint and feelings across!

That was really sweet, Neferit. I love Domi's IWD2 Project, and you've done it justice, I think. I've never played the Rizdear romance, but after reading it, I think I might. There were a few mistakes, which stupidly, I didn't think to document, but other than those, the story was perfect.

It's so nice to see the Icewindale section start to blossom! Good job.

One thing I do remember - "Looking on your face was pleasant way how to start a day." should be "Looking at your face was a pleasant way to start the day." or "Looking down on your face was a pleasant way to start the day."