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| harryedwardgirl93 2008-08-05 ch 1,  | abuseI have never liked Rose and afer BD I really don't like her but I think it was a good one-shot. |
| Permanent Rose 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseYou did Rosalie perfectly...a bit of that bitchy (excuse my language) side of her, but also that deep side of her that we rarely see. Excellent job. ~Rose |
| MoonlightShadowOfADarkDream 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseI think you did really well, and that Rosalie is indeed quite nice. It was really good. |
| uvegottolovemebroadway 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseI liked the dstory. I think that you made her a little too kind- in the begining, I see how she would be nicer at the end, but what about her fury? She is pissed off at Bella. I just have to say one other thing, that whole "global warming" comment was completly random and not needed. Some people don't belive in Global Warming. I know when you read this, it will sould like a flamer, but this isn't. It's not supposed to. I really liked the aw moment, it was just sickly sweet. |
| GryffindorGal87 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseI loved it and I think you got Rosalie perfectly. =] |
| FaithInSnape 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAw! That was so good! I really love how you ended it! Great job on this! :) |
| blackolives10 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI am really enjoying these family/Bella stories. Please keep them coming! You are a very talented author. |
| mnov29 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abusehey this was good! |
| Glitch in the System 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was perfect. I think you have Rosalie down to a tee, because she's not evil and she's not even that much of a bitch. I think you are right. She doesn't hate Bella. She hates her decision. Great Job! |
| gracefullyme1025 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was nice, I hardly come across stories with Rosalie's POV. I think you wrote it just right. :) |
| Xx EdwardLova xX 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abusei really love it!! even though ur only half-way through, u make a better understanding of wat Rosalie is always feeling. And how she would feel if there was no Emmett. |
| Hermione W. Cullen 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI like reading Rosalie's POV fanfics, especially when they're not absurdly OOC. I appreciate your attempt to put a reason to Rosalie's hatred of Bella. Interesting story. |
| insert a creative name here 2008-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it! It was well written! =D |
| Unknown 2008-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseNo I don't think Rosalie sounded too nice. This was actually really good. maybe now she starts to finally understand why Bella is giving up everything to be with Edward. |
| PurpleMatter 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseActually, I thought that was fantastic. I have no IDEA why you don't already have at least ten reviews. Everyone is flawlessly in character - I can just imagine this conversation happening in the books. You made your point, and brought Bella and Rosalie closer together in a way that's not cliched, or overdone, or unrealistic, but in a way that suits them and their crazy situation perfectly. |