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| hardylover7477 2008-07-26 ch 80, | abuseWhat in the hell is that!!??!?!?! Now you really have to update fast because I want to know what the hell is going on. I cann't say that it's not Speed because of what we all forsaw in the future but who knows. I bet it's just some sick fantasy..LOL. |
| brttmclv 2008-07-26 ch 80, | abuseMaybe it's wishful thinking but I think I know who it is! Lovely as ever! Intense as no other. It's was prefection but I've learned to not expect any less than that from you...lol! It so made my day to read this. Can't wait to see who really is behind that door and what's going to happen!! :) |
| Forest Angel 2008-07-25 ch 80, | abuseI'm glad he told her what happened at the raid. Max needs to get a life, even if she was genuinely concerned. And your muse is evil keeping us waiting like that, just please not too long. |
| Apodrru 2008-07-25 ch 2, | abuseI just started reading your story. So far I really enjoy it and if nothing else, you have completely brought me in with your description of Lindsay! It was great and the other characters thoughts about her as well. As you can tell I am not a fan of Lindsay and do feel she is selfish and sullen, but unfortunately she is supposed to be someone that everyone sees as great and that just really bugs me. To get back to my review. You have a very descriptive writing style and I liked that you started the story at the end because it has made me want to see how things developed. Anyway, off to read more. |
| ImaSupernaturalCSI 2008-07-24 ch 79, | abuseReading about what went down at the warehouse was intense. Just like watching 'Snow Day' all over again. Poor Flack and Sam. Nothing can go smoothly, can it. I do enjoy all the foreshadowing you toss into your chapters. Looking forward to more. |
| EvaFlack001 2008-07-23 ch 79, | abuseHey there, I haven't reviewed in a while, I've been a bad lurker but I've been reading and thoroughly enjoying every word. I particularly loved this chap, Sam was so brave and so funny all at the same time. It must be horrible being married to a cop. Our police aren't even armed and they hardly ever get killed on duty (thank God). I cried buckets (doesn't take much these days!) I thought it was brilliant from start to end. |
| brttmclv 2008-07-22 ch 79, | abuseWow! That was intense, I loved it. How Carmen got upset, how Sam and Don were when they saw each other again, amazing! I still love Sam and Adam! When she calls him Peanut, I just love them! Great chapter, I was speechless! I can't wait for more!!:) |
| Bluehaven4220 2008-07-22 ch 79, | abuseUp down and everywhere again! Wow, what a ride! I knew Don was going to be okay, but really, you can't argue with Sam getting all up in Gerrard's face. Excellent chapter, it really was. Great job, love. |
| Soccer-Bitch 2008-07-22 ch 79, | abuseawesome chapter! |
| Forest Angel 2008-07-21 ch 79, | abuseGood chapter, I like the contrast of the nice domesticity with the harsh realities of their jobs. Poor Adam being given the task of keeping her calm! Hope there aren't too many repercussions from the shooting, they don't need it. |
| hope4sall 2008-07-21 ch 79, | abuseI loved the emotion in this. The morning scene - oh so touching. Touching his hair, making coffee and breakfast for him, the shirt, the hug at the end. I also liked Flack's view of the raid, after it was over. The detail about why he was in the back, his reaction to killing a perp. His anger at Danny (and Carmen too) and then how he went to Sam. nice touch. And the last scene was beautiful. I loved how he found her and held on to her. Very lovely. Great chapter. |
| ImaSupernaturalCSI 2008-07-18 ch 78, | abuseThat was a pretty hot chapter. Major major major brownie points to Flack for dinner, flowers, carriage ride, second proposal and...heh, well... :) Looking forward to more! |
| ImaSupernaturalCSI 2008-07-18 ch 77, | abuseThe Mickey D breakdown made me cry. Just wanted you to know. It was wonderfully written. And the return of the Wilder gang?? Oh... |
| Forest Angel 2008-07-18 ch 78, | abuseA great romantic night. They really must be growing up if they didn;t end up in an argument with Sam's comments in the park and Flack's revelation about Max. Nicely done! Nice touch adding JJ in. |
| Bluehaven4220 2008-07-18 ch 78, | abuseThis chapter made me smile very very broadly. It was so sweet and fluffy and made my day. I'm actually at work right now talking to a whole bunch of answering machines, and this chapter made me smile while I was doing so. I love the re-propposal in the carriage in the middle of Central Park. I never expected that out of Don Flack. Romantic, sentimental bastard he is. I wish that would happen more often, because it's something that they'll remember for the rest of their lives. Great job on this chapter. Talk to you soon, and have a great day today |