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| muchmadness 2008-05-14 ch 55, | abuseHi! I just got hooked to this story. It's really amazing. I was practically in tears at the first chapter, and I keep going back to it and getting sad all over again. You really have a gift! |
| Madison Bellows 2008-05-14 ch 55, | abuseToo cute and too fabulous, I think your writing is causing my plot bunnies to hop away in fear! Love what you are going here. |
| Mauveine 2008-05-14 ch 55, | abuseOh, Adam. What can I say about him other than he is so cute and I want to hug him!?! lol. Wonderful chapter, very informative and I think that I would have to be on Flack's side. But who knows? the whole situation must be incredibly frightening. I loved the interaction between Gus and Sam and I am interested to see more of that friendship and definitely the interactions between Adam and Gus. lol. Walking into the door? Classic and so funny! |
| laplandgurl 2008-05-14 ch 55, | abuseMac is a wise man - lol - and I loved Adam and Gus together - Adam trying to ask her out for dinner - so sweet. I need a man in my life if I can't have Mac... |
| angel-for-rent 2008-05-14 ch 55, | abusethank you! you made possibly my week! sadly I must go watch Children of Men now thanks for that ^-^ |
| Bluehaven4220 2008-05-14 ch 55, | abuseHow do I know that they'll be getting the tests (one or two of them) done anyway? The two of them make me smile, they really do, and Adam is so cute when he's around Gus. I can't wait for the next chapter, update soon |
| Aphina 2008-05-14 ch 55, | abuseHey! I loved this chapter, it was fantastic tyo see Adam and Gus flirtng lol, it made me laugh and it was adorable! I love Mac's advice too! Seeing both sides of the argument gives us a better perpestive of the relationship and I adore seeing that. |
| Soccer-Bitch 2008-05-14 ch 55, | abusegreat chapter! |
| Bluehaven4220 2008-05-13 ch 54, | abuseOh dear... I feel for them, I really do. I can't imagine finding out thatt hey could be a problem. It must be heartbreaking. The emotion was spot on, though. That's exactly how I thought they were going to react. What do you have planned next? |
| angel-for-rent 2008-05-13 ch 54, | abusehello! I have to comment because I love this story! but yet there was something that bothered me about this chapter the part with People Magazine 50 Most Beautiful people. I 100% agree David Beckham because well he is amazing, and that body...but come on Clive Owen was named he's not so bad lookin, I wouldn't look away if he walked in a room. yes, so ignore the craziness and keep updating! |
| Mauveine 2008-05-13 ch 54, | abuseOMG - that's about all I can get out. Apple juice, or anything for that matter, should not be drank while reading your chapters. I about died with the whole Cosmo chat between Carmen, Sam, & Stella. You are SO funny! I love it! Bad Sam for the text message lol. I think my husband would kill me! I love it! Maybe someday when I am brave enough I will try that. I love the relationship between Flack and Sam even if they argue. I think that it just shows that they are very passionate people. Adam as always is wonderful! Very brotherly and loving! Looking forward to more! |
| Madison Bellows 2008-05-13 ch 54, | abuseI love how you managed to slip a little bit of everything in here! I about died with Stella and the girl talk. And I could so see poor Flack all horny in his meeting. Plus then the baby-drama and all. Adam is so cute and sweet. And about to get his groove on ;)! |
| laplandgurl 2008-05-13 ch 54, | abuseOMG - I'm so glad that I wasn't drinking anything when I read Stella saying about Mac letting her do that - lol - and I need to start buying Cosmo if just for sex tips like that. I loved the girl talk with Stella, Sam and Carmen - ladies sure can get rauchy when they get together - a group of us women here at my workplace have ladies night every now and then and what a hoot - one memorable night involved wine and a hot tub - lol - good thing the hostess had two bathrooms in her house - we had two ladies - too much wine, too much hot tub and not enough food - get the picture. I can understand Flack's feeling about the one test involving very big needles - cringes in sympathy - but some doctors are so scared of malpractice suits. I'm looking forward to Wednesday's episode of CSI:NY - can't to see what happens with the taxi killer. |
| Aphina 2008-05-13 ch 54, | abuseLMAO You used the nip/tuck thing! STill telling you I was like wow! when it happened. Anyway back to your chapter. I loved the whole magazine thing, it was girly fun and made me giggle, it was nice thjem having a girly gossip about sex, because sriously everyone does it. it made me grin! I love the fight they had over the esting. It was honest and enuinely concern that people go through and it was fab to see Adam atthe end doing what was best for his sister. lMao about Sam and Carmn gossiping in the lab, high five on an awesome chapter! |
| Soccer-Bitch 2008-05-12 ch 54, | abuseloved it! can't wait for more! |