Amazing. Usually I won't read such short versions of HGSS, but yours is truly a wonder. You have left this a bit open ended, had you planned to continue with it? If so, please drop me a message.

you always manage to inspire me... i too decided to step away but find that i am more and more drawn back, but am, up to this moment resisting the urge to create an ending with these two. anyway. love the tone, the image and of course the extreme care for detail. you and ariadne are the best for those little tweeks in language.

It is always so delightful to read you; your writing is as smooth as ever, like the sound of wool you're talking about. An admirable piece of velvety writing. Thanks.

that was SO good!

This was a very good, and pleasant chapter you have written. Keep smiling. :-)

that was really sad but it was really good too!