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| mimifoxlove 2008-08-19 ch 1,  | abuseHi that was so funny! mimi |
| NuttyFluffer 2008-08-17 ch 1, | abusehahahaha |
| humor me :D 2008-08-16 ch 1, anon. | abuselolz i love this i'm more of an yaoi person so... yeah i loved it whean L said You should throw away the ‘extra large’, Misa-san lolz yah i use a lot of lolz... lolz bye :D |
| Bamboo Marbles 2008-08-12 ch 1, | abuseI felt as if I was there. Funny? Indeed it was! |
| Lady Shikyo 2008-08-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was hilarious! I love dialogue... |
| demondog-alchemist 2008-08-06 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, omg, WIN! i love this. XD |
| NightPredator 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abuseI just keep snickering now with the conversation after Misa passed out. xD L is such a nuisance...although...I thought it seemed kind of arousing with the fact that Raito and Misa had sex in front of L. Still, L was a total prat about it with all of his comments.. |
| shirosunday 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abusehahaha... yes. VERY funny! |
| Kinoshita Kristanite 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuse"So sex is just a joke in heaven?" "Are you kidding? Have you _seen_ the looks you people get on your faces?" Dogma. Kevin Smith. Jay and Silent Bob. Funny. Ne, I -like- the narration style in this. >.> That makes me weird, doesn't it? |
| bahari 2008-06-28 ch 1, | abuseWow, I loved this so much. It was almost impossible to breathe as I read it, since I was laughing at it so incredibly hard. The short, sharp sentences of the descriptive parts imitate ... well, sex, and the dialogue was just brilliant! Great job! |
| Nicole 2008-06-10 ch 1, anon. | abusehaha OMG so funny, and i luv that you had L comment on the face thing. Since raito does have a tendecy to make weird faces, it'd actually make sense... XD and btw i know what you mean abou the misa thing, something just seems off... d..^.^ |
| Star Jinin 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseAh! MY EYES,MY EYES! Heck, If you'd just change the rating from T to M, this wouldn't have happened! |
| Loren 2008-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm pretty sure my mom is wondering why I can't stop laughing. So yes, it was funny. Very much so. And *so* believable. I would have *loved* seeing/reading this in the actual show/manga. |
| Moony 2008-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuse“Which, Ryuuzaki, is why you’re a virgin.” “…Oh. That was low. Possibility of being Kira up 5 percent due to malice.” -snickers- Something L would say , indeed!! “I hate you.” “So does Kira. Ten percent.” Wham. LMAO. Priceless! So far your stories ( those who I've read so far) have made me laugh like a banshee. Good Job! |
| RyokoMaxwell 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI know it's pretty late to review, but I'm procrastinating on studying for finals aka reading fanfiction. I just wanted to let you know that this story kept me chuckling throughout. It's wonderful how L can be so annoying in this type of situation and yet I can still see him being IC o.O; Maybe that's just me. lol I have to admit, I despise MisaXRaito, but since your other stories were magnificent, it spoke for itself. Thank you for making me glad I didn't pass it up. P.S. - the yaoi fangirl side of me also thanks you that you didn't go into detail with the het sex ;p |