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Boleyn
2008-08-21
ch 10,
abusePoor Harry!!, please let everything work out and no more of his family die, I can't believe that they are blaming Harry, he saved them from Voldemort, please don't maake it so that Harry has to stop himself from saving Tom because that would be awful.
Naatz
2008-08-21
ch 10,
abuseomg.

I am so insanely addicted to this that I can't even give any concrit without hitting my head a few times.

I'm dying to know what is going on. *_*

|Meduza|
TLDriver66
2008-08-21
ch 10,
abuseI'm now really confused. Who is attacking the Potter's, and why?
Fulminate
2008-08-21
ch 10,
abuse=O awesome chapter! I am completely reeling. I did not expect this at all.
Juli3ta
2008-08-21
ch 10,
abuseYou are killing me!
I let pass wiyhout reading the last chapter, because I wanted to read the two chapters together, and I read about your vacations,

AND NOW THIS! I HATE YOU!!...Im dieng here ... are you going yo post soon??
sheepstamper
2008-08-21
ch 10,
abuseNow that was an enterainting chapter - well done and congratulations for having three of your stories entered into the Quibbler Awards...Hope you win...Sheeps
gallandro-83
2008-08-21
ch 10,
abuseWow.

O.o

Wow

X|

WOW!

Great chapter. I can't believe the twists you just threw our way. The thing with Remus was inspired, I never saw that part coming. I mean it was obvious that things were starting to come to a head but honestly having Remus be the trigger that starts the tragedy was amazing. He survived the longest in canon and I guess there is a little bit of a prejudice to think he will not be killed so early like that.

On top of that something is obviously going on with Hermione and Kingsley. I imagine that the next step for the Potter clan is going to be trying to forcibly remove them from the Black Watch and see what they know about everything. I can't wait to see how Harry Potter handles a geurilla war on his own turf against people that don't know what they are up against.

OOh, I just realized Mr. Riddle might still be considered the Headmaster by Hogwarts. Does this mean that the castle will help them against intruders and stuff? Will they be able to use the Chamber of Secrets at all? I can't imagine that Harry wouldn't have set up a back door into Hogwarts when the writing was on the wall so to say, and his son was in charge.

I also imagine we might see the rest of the Potter clan try to gather toward England again. Bring all those displaced family members home to be safe and keep them out of the Watch's hands.

The only question I have is wether James is dead or not. I mean you have Harry stating he lost 2 sons, 2 son in laws, a grandson, and a father; yet just a couple of sentances above that we hear that James was being brought to the Infirmary Harry keeps in the house. SO which is it is James alive or Dead.

Either way can't wait for more. We need to find out about Sirus and Peter. About wether the Weasley's will be targeted for their relationship with so many Potters.

gallandro

ps. Will we see the new chapter for Beyond the Veil lies ... Chicago anytime soon?
NekoDoodle
2008-08-20
ch 10,
abuseReally, it's like the worlds tables have turned.
Tarva
2008-08-20
ch 10,
abuseThought you might draw it out a bit, but this seems to be fine. Excellent work as usual.
JVTazz
2008-08-20
ch 10,
abuseAbsolutely brilliant. I definately want to see how the count gets his family out of the ministries clutches abd who is the big baddie behind it.
SomeGuyFawkes
2008-08-20
ch 10,
abuseGreat chapter, if somewhat depressing.

Hopefully Harry will finally take the offensive.
maritinkerbell
2008-08-20
ch 10,
abuseGREAT CHAPTER! Very intense and emotional. I was confused for a bit in the middle, when the Black Watch attacked the Unspeakables, but that cleared up by the end of the chapter. Now I see that my confusion mirrored that of the characters'. Very sophisticated writing! Now, please UPDATE SOON!
Fred the Man
2008-08-20
ch 10,
abuseWOW, you took a chainsaw and just hacked and slashed through Harry's family. You know Blackwatch, Crouch jr and Malfoy are involved, particularly Lucius because they made the point to bring up his dad's life debt to Harry, which really was not that important in the big scheme of things. Now what for Harry? He has to find someway to protect the non-fighters in his family, find the people responsible and KICK SOME MAJOR **! I think it would be wise if Harry goes to the airwaves and gives his side of things before the ministry gets to spread to much propaganda vilifying the Potters. Point out that since Croaker's oath meant he could not betray the Ministry, his death because of Blackwatch was actually an assassination. Point out that it was he not Blackwatch who killed the werewolves during the train attack and saved two students who were injured. Point out that Blackwatch made no attempt to arrest the Potters peacefully, rather breaking the doors down and firing Unforgivables with no regard, so any Blackwatch who died were killed by the Potters is self defense. Very interested in what Harry does next? Maybe we will get a Harry/Christina combo pairing up to deal out punishment.
Aisucold
2008-08-20
ch 10,
abuseSo many people died. Its sad. I hope things get better.

I dont quite understand did James die?
TricaLee
2008-08-20
ch 10,
abuseOkay...Now that was nasty! A frame-up don't you think? Maybe Barty Jr. was behind it again. Gee, it's mystery guessin' time. *sigh*
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