i lvoe this story but one thing ihoped for more of in here is snape. i LOVE snape! i wanted to see more of him...and maybe see him being depicted in a good way...here, he just seems like a very jealous, spiteful person with not too many redeemable qualities.. not that he was mentioned much in this story

i am not really sure how harry can be with fleur...wasn't she supposed to get with bill? but other than that discrepancy, i do love that harry and fleur are together. she has shown herself to be a very loyal member of their group

when tom stepped down from being hte minister of magic, i thought that wasn't a very smart move. sure, he wanted to do something he lvoed, but with the prophecy that was in the making, he should have done the responsible thing and stay in office until he can help handle the situation. to me, it kind of seemed like he stepped down right when the wizarding world needed him the most...

sad that so many students were killed in the attack of the hogwarts express. to me, it seems so weird that a huge group of young students are traveling by themselves on a train. shouldn't there be adults there to supervise, at hte very least? to make sure there's a figure of authority there should something come up? fights between students, etc?

i hate that so many good families are dying and worse, that everyone thinks it's harry's family who's responsible. i hte that the wizarding community seem to have this sheep mentality. can they not think for themselves? they base all their opinions on what the ministry tells them? on what the daily prophet writes (the newspaper that's being controlled by the government?)

i was reading your a/n at the end of the last chapter and it made me sad that you said you've lost inspiration for this story... i know you said that you plan to continue this, but if you don't, i would completely understand. if possible, though, can you give us a short summary of how you vision things to play out? or some bullet points of what you had planned if you do decide to not complete this?

i know it's been a while since you've updated this story, but please don't give up on this! it's soo freakin good! i just spent two entire days reading everything. i love the world that you've created in here

i wonder if we'll be seeing more of the wizards in america...i hope so. htey seem like a good bunch

many of the black watch and the aurors were killed by harry and his family, right? it's a shame that the aurors, who are acting in the assumption that they're the proponents of good, are actually under the control of a dark lord... the good guys are killing each other..

it makes me so sad that so many potters lost their lives in this story...

i think one of the biggest problems in the harry potter world is how the press is controlled by the ministry. in america, we have free press, and most networks and newspapers try to be impartial, to just deliver the news without trying to bias the audience... at least, that's what i think. and for sure, the press isn't controlled by the government. the freedom of speech and press is one of the most fundamental rights of a person and it's a shame that the wizarding world hasn't realized that yet. how cn they not know how much power the written word has over a community? that once things are written down, entire opinions can be swayed and influenced? the pen is a powerful instrument, and when it's used by evil people, it's a very dangerous weapon

it's so incredible to me that a whole family with a history of doing only good things can suddenly be deemed evil by the entire wizrding community. don't these people have brains for themselves?

i don't think that luna will survive this war... i remember she hinted at one point that she will die soon...i hope not..i really love luna in here

wow...the 11 (12?) year old michele will be the savior of them all? i'm wondering how she can possibly do so. even harry was 17, 18 (?) when he defeated voldemort. she is still untrained and can barely fight... but i'm sure her sasquatch (sp?) heritage will help her somehow

this story is sooo good! i'm really looking forward to seeing how you plan to defeat grindelwald/cresswell in here