Perseus!

Grover is technically the oldest. And according to Botl (Battle of the Labyrinth), Percy seems to be taller than Annabeth. He is younger, though. Awesome fanfic. xD

Nice work you have there!
Could you PLEASE continue this story? Add a cliff-hanger part about Percy and Annabeth and Thalia and (possibly) Grover escaping from the Titans, and orgainizing a small army of few but powerful creatures (e.g. hippocampi, pegasi, Cyclopes, etc.). How about a big battle or something like that?
I hope you don't mind my crazy ideas. I'm an author of several novels (all still unpublished, since I'm twelve years old), and when I'm in front of the computer or holding my own version of Riptide (which, sadly, always runs out of ink), my mind simply sprouts wings (no offense, Lord Hermes).
Good work! Keep it up!
Just one question: Where did Annabeth get such a nice leatherbound journal? (Smuggled, maybe?)

good, but i was confused until you explained at the end. update soon

Interesting story. Definitely original. It's definitely well written as well. Just one question:

Isn't Grover older than everyone? He's like, 28 in the Lightning Thief. And he's 30 in the Titan's Curse. So wouldn't he be the oldest?

Unless you are referring to how old he is physically and mentally, satyrs mature half as fast as humans. But half of 30 is 15, so wouldn't he then be the second oldest?

Well anyways, this story was immaculately done. Not the most interesting, but you definitely have skills.

Keep writing!
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Um... Percy's name is short for Perseus