i thought that was good.=]i like the discriptions. you should update ASAP. then they can meet the cullens.=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]

That was really good. I liked how you portrayed Jasper's unease and anger. Also Alice's ... pushiness almost. She wouldn't let his fear get the better of him.

:D Great job.

*Rain

Definitely Jasper.
Kudos!

i really enjoyedthis i think its needs to show the first neounter with the cullens i really enjoyed the calmness between them and the way the comfprt each other

so good! really really good fic, i love it!

dobby

I like it, good job. =D

Oh my dog! i love this story!

that was cute!

aw! j/a are one of my fav couples. well they all are but who cares? lol

*claps* Nice job

Hee hee nice way to start a new life. 8-) they are so cute!

You're love of Jasper is evident in this piece. How can anyone not love Jasper?!

Very sweet and romantic. Nicely written.

This was very well written.

Excellent Job!! Totally Brilliant! XD

I love it!

that was exquisite!