there was a lot i loved about this.
first, Reno. even if he's only mentioned ^^
interesting pairing, too. i love how you wrote it. it was.. weird. but i really liked it.

damn, i'm rambling :D
it was good, though, really, really good!

Haha, i love how you just happen to write some of my favorite kink-fics. Substitution is one of my guilty pleasures. Anyways, this was written with a hint of sugar and a streak of longing and hopelessness, very well done.

oh this is good. you should write more of these.

You know, I never really deviate from Akuroku, but I was feeling like I wanted to try something different today and I sure am glad that I did! This is a beautiful story! (and it is different but not too different)

My favourite lines were when you wrote that Axel was the red in Reno's hair and Cloud was the blue in Roxas' eyes. When I first read that line, I didn't really think much about it, but later in the day and all throughout my other activities, those lines just kept haunting me. That is why I decided to find this story again and review.

Keep up that good work!!

Luv
Ki-chan

It is so sad. I've never heard of an Axel/Cloud fic but this was terrific. It nearly made me cry. Congrats on being such and amazing writer, keep writing.

Amazing story, very well written. I've never read an AxelCloud before nor have I ever thought of it either, but that was really good.

I saw this story on lj awhile back and I just never read it because it never really appealed to me... and then I ran across it now on someone else's faves and I decided it couldn't hurt to try..

And well, I'm glad I did and I'm sad I didn't try sooner. :3 I feel that in terms of other fics, this one is short-- on the sentences, or whatever, or the feelings, but I feel that you accomplished so much in that brevity and it's rare I'll find a fic like that I like. I'm all for long winded rambles-- I partake in many myself-- and it struck me as I finished your fic of how so few words you used and how you did so much with them.

aw...it's so sad...-sniff- it's a weird pairing, but it's sweet enough. XD

That was interesting, a great concept. This is a bit of a crack pairing but I'm glad that it wasnt an AxelCloud love story. Because in my heart Axel will be devoted only to Roxas... Sometimes I just get on a binge to read weird pairings. I think when I like them like I liked this story it makes me shocked that I could veer away from a pairing I'm so devoted to. Akuroku is still number one, but you've made me have an appreciated for AkuCloud. Great job.

Wow.
That was amazing.
And sad, and romantic, and..great :]
I loved it!

That was sad, but beautifully written. You deserve an A+ for it.

Beautiful.

Can't say much more than that. You got into the whole 'you remind me of someone, so I love you Roxas - I mean Cloud' type thing REALLY well, and it was just so beautiful.

Beautifully written. Beautiful idea. Beautiful emotions.

Well done.

I really loved this story. It was wonderful. I had never thought of this pairing before but I'm glad I managed to find this story.

not my favorite pairing but...*sobs* for this fic it didn't even matter. it was so beautifully written. it brought pain to my heart. :( its such a sad fic. *shiver/tears*

aw. see I "aww-ed". I really liked this. I was a little um...concerened, I guess, about the paring. I've never seen one like this. but I really liked the way you pulled it together. so keep on writing awesome stories. I'll wait.