Reviews for The Knight & Queen

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staceums 2008-06-10 ch 5,	abuseWow... I got butterflies when I was reading this. It's so good. Ah, the agony. I'm going to have to do it again with the music. I've got something similar planned for the pair myself. My story is agonizingly long, though, so if you want to just browse over another Basch/Ashe slant, hit my chapters 67-68. I'm curious to see what you think. Great writing! Ok, I'm off to read some more of your stuff...
Laguna's twin sister 2008-06-06 ch 5,	abuseAw... that was so sad... but... it was so REAL. I mean... yeah. That would have been how it happened. but ... wah... It's so... wah. I love it, as always. meeh. but I do wish there could be happier endings. nevertheless. I love it. super!
Laguna's twin sister 2008-06-06 ch 2,	abusewah that letter is so sad. But at least this fic isn't as stressful as true feelings... or at least ... not yet. haha So sorry for reading this only now!! I'm enjoying myself quite a lot. I'm on a reading frenzy tonight. (Off to read next chappie!)
OceanSapphire 2008-04-24 ch 5,	abuseMost of them, excluding one are kinda sad! Please do a happy one, like one during their adventures. Other then that, it was awesome!! Keep it up!
Earisu 2008-04-20 ch 5,	abuseAh... each time I say to you that your last chapter was the best... you surprise me once again. This was incredibly beautiful. You know I like some share of angst so... I loved this. But it made me so sad :( especially with "The days passed. Months went by. Years disappeared." which gave me the certainty that they would never see, or be with each other again :(
landis icelilly 2008-04-19 ch 5,	abuseOk, I thought the last chapter was kind of sad with a happy ending but this one I seriously cried. I love this song and this totally fit it. Awesome job as always! This was one of my favs so far. Keep it up, can't wait until the next one! :D ~~ landis icelilly ~~
landis icelilly 2008-04-19 ch 4,	abuseThis made my heart ache, it was written so beautifully well. Great job! ~~ landis icelilly ~~
aorin 2008-04-19 ch 5,	abuseI really shouldn't be reading something so depressing on a Sunday morning :( But, as sad as it was, I thought it was really well-written and the transtion between one scene to another, and the parallel between the two characters were done very tastefully and didn't feel forced. The length of it was just nice too ;) You do emotional fics very well ;) But sigh why do they have to be thrown into such sad situations all the time? Oh wait, that's the appeal that drawn us into it, right XD
AkeriAerkix 2008-04-18 ch 5,	abuseOkay, are you trying to make me all depressed? It worked. I've never heard of the song so I found it on YT and listened to it while reading...Depressing but GREAT. The fic was as good as if not better than the song itself. As always great work and I can't wait for the next chapter.XD
aorin 2008-04-14 ch 4,	abuseWhoa, for a minute there when Ashe wrenched the helm of his face, I thought she's going to give a punch that would send him seeing stars and angels around him ;P Luckily, they went for something better :D Well, I think he shouldn't have left Ashe just like that. Strangely, it's more common to see Ashe as the one leaving when she felt like it. And this take of them is quite interesting even though less common ;) Well, partly because Basch seemed to honourbound to just walk away after having hot, scorching sex... besides, like he could resist leaving her... XD It's nice to have a swet ending and that Ashe decided to stay and choose a different decision than his. He'd better treasure his chances, last thing I need is for them to go separate ways again XO Other than that, fantastic writing and lovely descriptions. You excel yourself in these little short drabbles :)
aorin 2008-04-14 ch 3,	abuseGosh, when Basch start hallucinating, he's losing it. You didn't specify but I have a question. How much does Basch knew about the truth about Ashe's death? Does he believe in the rumours of her committing suicide after Dalmasca has been taken and lost his will? Or deep down, he can sense that she's alive? But seriously, pieces of Basch's time in Nalbina are always strong and emotional. I think you did a good job in projecting Basch's despair and how he's losing faith :( Being confined could drive someone mad, honestly :3 But this does show the weaker side of Basch... and that he does have his more human moments, despite always showing a strong side TT^TT And Ashe, well, she's like a ray of light to him, the only thing that's probably keeping him alive in the darkness of the cell :( I wonder if he ever curse himself for being unable to protect her X3
aorin 2008-04-14 ch 2,	abuseI'd like to slap Basch across the face for the sole reason of not giving the letter to the personally. Why does he have to be so impersonal, huh? :3 God, if he had just showed up with the darn letter in his hands, she might have just fallen into his arms. No offense, it's charming to send he a letter of congratulatory and well-wishes, but nothing beats being in their in person. Why did they keep on making mistakes and missed all the chances? X3 You made her cry!! Man, if Basch knew how much tears Ashe shed for him... THEY ARE SOULMATES. PERIOD!!
aorin 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abuseAw... unrequited feelings :( The most important things that were never said. It's only three words that many utter freely and weigh so little to others and yet convey so much emotions. Poor Ashe. Now, she is to weep for what would never be, or what could have been. Would Basch have acepted her if she'd admitted her heart to him :( She'll never know if there's another ending to the tale. I think this piece is beautifully written, despite being short :)
Earisu 2008-04-07 ch 4,	abuseOh, 'tis beautiful. My favourite drabble this one :) I don't know the music, and I can't hear it right now, but I will listen to it as soon as I can :) I love the "don't you dare walk away" - WAY TO GO, QUEEN :D ... actually I loved everything. And I knew, in the last part, Ashe hadn't walked away... she just went to somewhere else (hungry in this case) and she would certainly come back to lay next to him :) ... who wouldn't? Lovely writing, Amy ;) never lose this awesome skill, you hear?
duskshard 2008-04-07 ch 4,	abuse"For a brief moment, they would be lost in each other, yet reality would pull them apart. They knew they would never be accepted together." This summarises their relationship well though I wish it weren't so! Fantastic writing.

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