Great story.

Hey :) I just found this story, and I really like it! I loved every second of it! Great job :D

ArmedWithMyComputer xxx

I don't know how I missed this one - thank goodness one of my C2's just picked it up. I could swear I'd read it and reviewed already!

Great job with the prompts. And darn those ocean skipping fuglies. Great fic.

Phoebe

Wow! Very nicely done here TraSan! Poor guys, all wet and cold and getting eaten... m... *spocked eyebrow*

So is an Eloko and actual creature? If not yousure created one helluva creepy thing! Taking a bite out of Dean..m ahem what? and clawing poor Sammy and that magnificent chest of his ... sigh... Anyway great job! Bravo! Brava!

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That was great; I really enjoyed it! I especially loved the brotherly banter. Call me stupid, but I couldn't find the 'blue' reference. Mind you it is 12:40am so I'm not at my best lol. Great job, thanks for sharing!

I am SLOWLY catching up! Loved the one shot!

Impressive, especially for a challenge fic where you set length limits and had other constraints. You did a great job, and nothing felt forced at all. LOVED the cream flicking, so funny!

This part was especially nice: "“You know the symbols?” Dean asked, his eyebrows arching.

Sam tossed him a disgusted look and resumed etching the symbol. Of course I don’t know for sure, I’m guessing here. Can’t you see how much that scares me?

Dean patted Sam on the back. “Of course you know the symbols. Geek boy strikes again.” Dean crouched down into Sam’s line of sight. “But, you know – I’d be okay with a Sammy guess. They’re better than most people’s facts.” " Nice brotherly moment there. :)

And kudos for using a new supernatural creature that we haven't heard of before. I was afraid he was going to swallow Dean whole and Dean would have to shoot his way out. Which would have been funny, but also really gross. LOL

Keep it up! I'm enjoying reading your fics.

Great fic! (sorry I can't think of much to say) I really enjoyd reading, it was a fun story.

I nearly missed this fic - so I'll be putting you on alert. It only takes a day or two for something to get buried on this site, so I'm so glad I saw this one recced.

My favourite part was definitely the opening scene in the diner. I just love realistic banter between the brothers and you do it perfectly.

Beautifully written - as always.

Dang it. This one slipped by me. Thank goodness for reccs over on SFTCOLARS. Won't happen again now I remembered to click the author alert button. My bad.

Fun story. This is one of the reasons I love fanfic. You can tell great tales with great creatures like this and your imagination does them far more justice than the SN creature FX shop could. I mean the thought of Sam and Dean battling a grass-haired dwarf - priceless! Laughs and battered boys - what more could a gal ask for? Yum.

Heh heh, the Eloko never stood a chance against the Winchesters! Nice banter between the boys, and as always it's nice to see them looking after each other - even if it is after a lot of teasing!

This bit:

At the last moment, Dean moved the cup away, not even sparing a glance at his little brother, and the container continued on to the next table where it landed in the soup bowl of a grandmotherly woman.

“I, I’m so sorry,” Sam stammered an apology over his brother’s chuckle. “I was aiming for my brother’s glass.” He blushed a hotter shade of red at the weak excuse.

really made me laugh _. I almost sprayed my mouth-full of half-chewed waffles over my keyboard. Thank god no one was here to witness my ladylike behaviour... Though I have to say, if Sam trew the container hard enough for it to reach the next table he wouldn't have hit Dean's glass anyway... kiddo must be getting a little rusty.

The hunt in the woods was great. And hurt Sammy on top of it - what more could I ask for? Great job!

Oh, by the way: where exactly did you use "blue"? I scanned over the text again but didn't see it.

I love your storys! Please, write again - but next time, not this short! I enjoy every word! Best wishes from Germany, Tardo

Once again, I love it. Awesome story.

Denise

OMG HUN you are a star!

writing such an awesome story with just three prompts.

hun youhave the mind of a god, a genious and kripke all in one x

AW hun your so talented and i love your humour x

-“Those little pixies were like rabid Tasmanian devils on crack.”

hahaha couldnt stop laughing cx

thanks hun, ace-ly written x