Adorable! OoC, but adorable!

Gahh that is so CUTE!!
please make more .I love it :]

Ha ha, quite amusing and very fluffy. Good job!

Yeah I'm intrested, you should finish! I HEART CLERITH!

Haha, got your PM, sorry for not reviewing right away. I got the email alert saying I had a new story to read about five minutes before I left town for a few days. I had time to read it and add to favorites, but not review. Sorry bought that.

Anyway.

I came in thinking this was going to be a one-shot, and was very happy to see at the end that you were planning on continuing on with more chapters.I really enjoyed reading this and look forward to reading more. :)

And you are right, it HAS been a long time since you wrote fanfiction. (escpecially in a fandom I read from :P )

I love your style of writing! You don't use too many complicated words, but you have the perfect timing and detail to dish out that vocabulary. ^^
I'm looking forward to what you crank out next!

the sweetest
laughed a lot with Yuffie! And Cloud's pout - that must be so cutie XD
Did I understand it right? Is there going to be a sequel? Ow, I can't wait!

Wow! This is great! Written very well, and yes I am interestd in it. I definetly look forward to the next installment. update soon!

LOL.
YOU'RE AMAZING,
AND WUT?
I'M INTERESTED.

You should really keep writing, FO SHO SISTA.

By all means, keep going. this one is brillant!

Hey there!

Excellent job. I really like how you've managed to give us a good glimpse of what life on the trail is for the group, as well as playing off the group's socio-political dynamics.

...

...did I really just use the word "socio-political" in reference to FF7? I need to spend less time in class ;-).

I also like the details you give us that fit in with the game world, even though they aren't expressly discussed in game. Specifically I'm thinking of Barret and his case of beer. Very in-character. I can even imagine him and Cid bickering over the last bottle (couldn't that be turned into a whole new fic?)

I would very much like to hear more about Cloud and Aeris's date in the next town (as well as whatever kind of mischief they can get into on their own).

In any case, good job, and I hope to see more fics from you in the future!

You should write more often! I loved this! You captured Cloud and Aeris perfectly!

Can't wait for the date!

YAY! Waitin for next chap!

aw, so cute >< continue it, pretty please? *joins cloud in giving you puppy eyes*