yay you updated! don't feel too bad though, it takes me forever to update too, what with school and all.

keep writing,
Alyx

Hello again! Long time no see! How've you been - I haven't been able to see over my pile of work. Still, it could have been worse - I could have been doing and extra GCSE - oh no, wait; I am!

I love the updates since I last read, I'm thrilled at the reintroduction of Merric, and also of Marnie getting to know Kel, I think they get along very well. As usual, you write superbly and are to be congratulated to the highest degree, alad, I have now run out of compliments so cannot continue.

Yay! I'm glad you updated! even if the chapters are short they're good...update soon! :D

Nice chapter. I liked Prompt 107 The Future the best.

Yay! I really liked these ones.

Nice chapter...please update soon!

You know, I always figured with Talia...loved it, UPDATE SOON! Everyone keeps mentioning this Goldenlake, I should really go see what it's about.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

I haven't followed this for awhile because the sheer enormity of the chapters scared me. However, I finally sat down and went straight through it last night and this morning - and now I am almost speechless.

This is amazing.

And I really shouldn't need to say more, but as more specific compliments go, I adore how every drabble gives a cute snippet within itself - and yet somehow the story is not flying all over the place.

One thing, though...er,
...Gannet??

oh my gahwd! you're back! I thought you must have died or abandoned us or something (all the same, really)! YAY!

I'm glad you're back, anyway. So who did Talia think she was kissing? Unless, Talia knew who she was kissing and was just trying to cover it up. I'm curious about this...

I had to look up the word sententiously. I guess if you only have a hundred words, you've got to choose them carefully. Thanks for the SAT prep, anyway.

And I'm really glad you're back.

yay! you finally updated!!:D Nice chapter! sry...i really don't have anything else to say...can't wait for your next update! ;D

Alyx

nice.

Loved it! I'd forgotten how much I like you writing style... heck I'd forgotten your writing completely >.< I had to read a couple chaps to remember what the story was. I'll keep reading even if you take long breaks but next if the break is that long, a quick summary of what was going on might be nice. Looking forward to more.

I love this story. You're a very talented writer and I hope you'll continue. Please let Nia come back into the story more. Please? She's my favourite character.
Your newest fan
Eros

Really nice story and plot, well set and well, characterised characters. One thing though, for your promptless segments, why don't you not seperate them at all? Just use a line break and only head the prompted segment,...not that I'd know "^^.
Keep it up!