That was absolutely adorable how he was so scared of Bill! Hahahahaha

I can actually imagine his face... all cute/handsome and scared... *giggles*

Another smashing story!

I loved this! And the self-reference was great. :)

I can totally see Teddy doing this.

Great, great job. :D

very sweet story! If I was Teddy I would proboly be afarid of Bill too lol I loved the last line.

Really funny and fluffy. Loved it!

Aw! So sweet! I loved it! The last sentence was the best ending imaginable! Thanks for writing!

I LOVE FLUFFY ONE-SHOTS SO MUCH!

OK. I've figured it out: you're a genius. This is great. This consistently superior writing is... wonderful. And I can tell that you're not JK Rowling in disguise (I had to speculate, though) because your writing style is noticibly different. Not less. Different.

You have your own style and this story (like every other one of yours that I've read) makes me smile and frown and my heart beat a little faster at all the right times.

Wow.

Keep writing,

Bottled Sunshine

I really liked this story! Your writing style is very accessable and flows very nicely and I like the bits of humor that you inject into it. I thought Teddy's use of 'Tor' was a good nicknam, although I was a little confused considering the 'Twa'. But overall, a lovely fic, and I definitely enjoyed it. The last sentence was the best! :)

Oh absolutely favoriting this! It's clever and self-aware and hilarious and also adorable! The characterization is hilarious, and Teddy being afraid of Bill? Hilarious!

omg, i love this...well im not sure if i can call it story cos its many little chapters, but i really love how youve put it all together and presented it. i really hope youll make a longer story. youve got a brilliant writing style that makes the reat ideas enjoyable to read

Ooh, I loved that last line. And the full circle thing. Thanks for writing all these wonderful stories! x

I told you you'd be hearing from me later.

I've still only got good things to say. Your character writing is superb, I particularly like the by play between Teddy and Em.

The best part from the three stories focusing on Teddy was how you made Teddy feel when he started Hogwarts. I think homesickness and nerves and worry are missed out of alot of people's writting because Harry doesn't show any when he comes to Hogwarts. But leaving home for the first time is one of the hardest things anyone goes through I think, and you wrote it beautifully.

Thanks.

Oh my gosh. So sweet! I absolutely loved it! Nicely done!