OH very sexy. I loved this chapter very much...to me it was so intense but I'm wierd like that.

you made cloud seem so pathetic. lol

this is good

I'd jsut like to say that Sasuke is a wangsty bastard enough on his own. Don't let it spread to poor cloud. Let him have his own story, K?

He doesn't need hate to kill, remember? Thats not quite how he works.

It's interesting. Is Cloud already a cadet or not yet?

Please don't stop update.