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| Becca 2008-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhoa, that ending was a shocker! Percy and Neville? Well, I have to say, I like that idea much more than Percy/Oliver. It's unique. You know what else? I don't know, I mean I've only read about a third of your work, but it's so you. I know, you don't really work on Percy, what I see in summaries, but you really flesh him out. I read Teenage Kicks earlier, and I like the Percy/Ron bond there. |
| Dodger Gilmore 2008-07-23 ch 1,  | abuseAw, I really loved this. It was a very nice moment for the two of them, and there were some good points about their relationship that made sense. Percy/Neville was unexpected, but kind of worked here. So, good job! |
| Mary Gooby 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuseOh. Percy/Neville is an interesting pairing, but good job anyway! I don't mind, really. It's a good fic! |
| fraewyn 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abuselol Wait, no continuing of the story? |
| Emma R 2008-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseAs always a brilliantly written fic. Fantastic! Really didn't see the pairing Neville/Percy coming though lol But no matter what pairing you do you seem to be able to make it work without changing the characters. Very well done! x |
| rupertlovesme 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseMan, I definitely wasn't expecting Neville. :D It made me laugh which was something I really needed. Can't wait to see what happens next! |
| HogwartsHoney 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseOk, so Neville and Percy is a new one on me but still, if nothing else it makes you smile, in an odd shocked way. Percy seems more emotional in your fics, I like how you included his perspective on his past actions too. |
| amieam 2008-03-25 ch 1, anon. | abusePercy knows Ron very well! Can't wait for more. |
| kain-boa 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat little story, would love to see it continued a few chapters yet, just to see rons reaction to the news. love the little surprise at the end with neville. keep up the great work :) |
| duj 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseHuh? Ron's always been nice to Percy? How could you possibly get that idea from canon, when it was completely the other way around? |
| Dreadnok 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abusewell ,Percy and Neville certainly aren't a canon relationship ... but the end did get a giggle out of me ... looking forward to more stories |
| nycRENTgirl 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abusehahahahaha great ending! I don't think I've ever read a Percy/Neville fic, actually. I wonder what they'd be like. but I loved seeing a Percy/Ron brotherly fic, since Percy is too often ignored as a character and as Ron's brother. I've noticed that you don't leave Percy out in your fics, which I really like. after all, Percy taught Ron to play chess; he probably taught Ron lots of other things too, and somehow that history is downplayed all the time. thanks! |
| talley67 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseEnjoyed emotional Percy. Charlie is my favorite brother with Ron but Percy is a close second. Very nice and loved how Neville popped in at the end. |
| akaccino 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseHuh. Well, I don't think I can say I'm suprised. Another gay thing. Typical. Lmao. I love the Ron/Percy brotherness. Percy certainly redeemed himself to me in the seventh book, but this is just the icing on the cake for me. Great work. ...Neville? -_-' Haha, it's all good :) |
| MatoakaWilde 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abusethis line was brilliant "Percy was flapping his arms like a flightless bird in denial of its limitations." lmao. nice work!! |