 Grace 2009-10-01 . chapter 15 I really enjoyed reading an insight into Draco's behaviour. There are a few grammatical errors. Also a few exclamations Draco makes that are 'muggle' remarks and I think they way you have described his life would mean he wouldn't know them! 'yeah, yeah, back to where i started so sue me'? Then again maybe they do sue in the magical world! The story makes me have alot more empathy for his character in the whole series. You write really well although sometimes I think the english may be a little advanced for an eleven year old to be speaking. I am intrigued to see where the story will lead next! |
 luvr4fantanim 2009-08-07 . chapter 15Wow!! I love the way that you write!! Hehe Little Dramione love!! XD I wonder what will be Hermione's evil plan?? I also can't wait to see how you write out Draco's reaction when he discovers that Hermione isn't really a Pureblood :D Hope that you update soon!!
Luvr |
 excessivelyperky 2009-06-30 . chapter 15I am delighted to see this alliance between Draco and Hermione, apparently the only two students in the Potions class who bothered to open the book. |
 Joycy 2009-05-21 . chapter 8I really like your story...having it made from Draco Malfoy's point of view. Are you going to start from first year up to the 7th? Pls, do so coz it would be interesting.
However, pls dont take too long to update coz i like your story very much. :-) |
 yellow 14 2009-05-20 . chapter 15The revenge of a Malfoy and Miss Granger is not domething I'd wish on my worst enemy. Actually I think I would. Keep updating |
 jdee-mysteries 2009-03-04 . chapter 14Hope you'll be updating soon, I love this story! I'm really curious to find out how Draco will react when he finally finds out that Hermione isn't a 'pureblood'. |
 jdee-mysteries 2009-02-27 . chapter 4Hello there! Though I'd finally make an attempt at a review...
So far, I am really enjoying this, and I'm really not much of a Draco fan either. But your writing is so intellegent and I love the flow. I always enjoy hearing other character's point of view on scenes from the book. I think you have nailed Draco's personality and behavior; I loved the exchange between Draco and Harry (or the lack there of, lol). Very interested to see what you do with D/H, as that's another couple I haven't read too much about. Looking forward to the next chapters!
BTW, small nit-pick, your chapter summary states "Draco’s visit to Diagon Alley introduces him to a boy without a name.
" and there is one part during their exchange that you mention that the nameless boy is acutally Harry. Of course, I'm sure everyone knows it is, but since you are writing this from Draco's POV, I didn't know if it was supposed to be there or not. Not that is matter too much, just trying to be helpful. :) |
 excessivelyperky 2009-02-17 . chapter 14Actually, I think it would do Draco good to go sit with her--as the party more practiced in etiquette, it's up to him to make the first move--and then invite her to sit over by him. If he can be bright, cheerful and civil to the other Gryffindorks (cough Ron Weasley cough) even if they're not, Hermione will notice (especially if he expresses a positive opinion of McGonagall). And if he can explain things to his seatmates when she does come over, so they will be nice to her, then well, there are other things than points to be won here .
Neat chapter, glad to see you updating. |
 NellieNotMolly 2009-02-08 . chapter 14Ooh, Draco is really going to be shocked when he finally gets a hold of that genealogy, isn't he? I'm enjoying his confusion! :-)
These tickled me: “It’s strange, liking a Gryffindor professor, we’re not really supposed to do that.”
and “Ravenclaw? Seriously?” ...At least she hadn’t said Hufflepuff. That would suggest brain damage." He doesn't even realize how obnoxious he is! Ha! |
 yellow 14 2009-02-03 . chapter 14A sweet little chapter. Keep updating |
 NellieNotMolly 2009-01-25 . chapter 11I have enjoyed reading your story, which I started after your latest update. It's really interesting to see Draco from the inside, so to speak. Makes it easy to understand why he is the way he is. Love your Pansy! She is perfect! :-)
I also love you "muggle fairy tale madness" fics. Hope to read more from you soon! |
 excessivelyperky 2009-01-14 . chapter 13Well...he might trying looking up the name "Snape"..Or 'Riddle' for that matter. But his instincts towards Hermione are just fine--that letter from his mother, though, isn't going to help. I'm glad he's nice to the owl, though. It shows his heart's in the right place. |
 yellow 14 2009-01-07 . chapter 13Long time no see. A fairly good addition to this fic. |
 shell 2009-01-06 . chapter 13 Love your story, espically how you focus on Hermione and Draco's releationship. Please update soon! |
 Catastrophic.Composer. 2009-01-06 . chapter 13wow!i love it so far ! excellent story and very interesting!
are you going to be writing Draco's whole years at Hogwarts? is this like an AU version or just the harrypotter version wtih Draco freidns with Mione?
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