Your writing is good, save for some minor, unimportant grammatical errors. However, is this, eh, a spinoff on "Honey, I Shrank the Kids"? If it is, you should write a disclaimer for THAT, too. Also, how well do you pay attention to details in the show? Perhaps it's because I only skimmed through this, but aren't fairies magical? Couldn't they just poof themselves back to normal size?