 nicole napier 2009-11-29 . chapter 37woww!! awsomee storiee..i cant stop reading..its soo addicting, and the best part is that there is a LOT more Jasper... this is the best twilight new moon etc etc, related storie ive ever read...i got to give u some mad props, the storie amazes me, its all well thought out, and well put (in order of the books), ive ever seen or read...i really feel for jazz..everyones picking at him 'cause of his weakness..but they dont see his true potential, he can do more than they give him credit for...i now 'cause hes the best..hahaha...and at the end the pacific-thingy was from a cut sceen in the book(cant remember wich one i think new moon) that Ed gives bella a check to go to college, if im not mistaken, by the same name(Isaac Randall from the Pacific Northwest Trust Company) and she refuses the check(rips it appart)'cause she thinks its edward and awnyways she wanted to raise money herself..I think thats it..if its not then im crazyy..and must be dreaming things..haha
oxoxox nicole napier♥
P.S: 2 thumbs up..awsome storie.. :)^w^ |
 Sanrio-chan 2009-11-29 . chapter 75This was pretty awesome! Reading this always reminds me of the books, without actually rereading them, y'know? It's funny and serious and suspensful. It's everything!! And I'm sorry to hear about the pidgeon :( it happens to the best of us. |
 nicole napier 2009-11-27 . chapter 2JASPER!...i cant believe it..its jasperr!!*sigh*...he's the best..the sexiest...i would die if i saw him...shes soo lucky..
oxoxox nicole napier♥ |
 albnal33 2009-11-26 . chapter 77I know I've said it before, but your story really is an inspiration. The amount of effort you must have poured into it is unfathomable, and is so apparent. Honestly, I prefer your story to the real Twilight Saga at this point. Yours, in my humble opinion, is actually superior in the thought you've put into every detail and how adheres seamlessly to Stephenie's Twilight reality. I cannot wait to keep reading.
Also, I just wanted to say, the ENTIRE time I was watching New Moon I was comparing it to your story, specifically in the scene where Bella and Jacob are driving and Jake is talking about he should have dragged out the rebuild of the bikes. I kept expecting to catch a glimpse of Cammy stowing away in the flatbed! This is how much you've impacted my psyche. |
 Txsal1 2009-11-25 . chapter 30I have been following this story for several months, and I have to say it's one of my very favorite FF stories! You are one awesome writer!! The way you've not only worked Cammy into the books, but actually made her proactively cause alot of the situations in the books is so awesome. This is the perfect ff story, seriously - the characters are so perfectly written, fit so well with the books, and the way you've crafted the events, is just staggeringly(is that a word? If not, it is now) clever. Can't wait to see how you tackle Breaking Dawn! You ARE going to go there, right? You ARE going to go through BD? Please? Pretty Please?! Love this story. It's totally made of awesome. Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us!! |
 Icis of Avalon 2009-11-18 . chapter 77I really like your story. It is closer to the Twilight story line than many of the others, with still being a completely stand-alone story. I love the view Cammy takes on things and am looking forward to reading the rest of the story. Even though I know Twilight's plot, I can't wait to see how Cammy deals with it. |
 Rain Kayheart 2009-11-15 . chapter 77RAR! u shall die a 10 times for tha cliffe! (but ima bring u back so u can keep writing, so no worries!) I AM TEAM PAUL OH YEAH |
 ChaosHasCome 2009-11-15 . chapter 77My, it's been so long since I've read this fic! I had to reread several chapters but, as always, you continue to produce insanely addicting and very high-quality chapters. This is my absolute favorite fanfiction that I have read on this site, completely unique and worthy of the highest praise an author can get. So, congratulations of having one of the best stories out there, and, I'm going to be on the edge of my seat until the next chapter is up.
ChaosHasCome |
 soccerislife14 2009-11-13 . chapter 77This is my favorite Twilight FanFiction of all time. Seriously. It's so amazing, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. This writing is so much like the book; Everytime I read Twilight lately, I keep thinking that Cammy is going to pop up somewhere. haha. You've really kept your character real and believable, which is extrememly hard to do, but you've pulled it off! I love the story line and the plot. It's a very original point of view to put things in.
This story is awesome. Keep up the AMAZING work, and try to update soon. :D
-soccerislife14 |
 sorenowl 2009-11-12 . chapter 77Ohh, nice touch. Your such an evil person to leave a cliffie though ;) |
 Ea Ailill 2009-11-07 . chapter 77Oh my gosh.
They're in Seattle??
UPDATE NOW!
NOW!
NOW!! |
 pixielike-alice 2009-11-06 . chapter 77YES! You updated! Thank you so much!
And I love the new chapter! xD |
 Unerose93 2009-11-05 . chapter 77love love LOVE it! |
 Infinant-heart 2009-11-04 . chapter 77Happiness and love at the new chapter! Even if you take forever to update, I'll be in love with this story. I can't believe that Cammy is so surprised that Bella doesn't know everything. There is a lot of stuff that Edward doesn't tell her, she hardly hangs with most of the other vamps or werewolves aside from Alice, Edward, and Jacob.
Are Cammy's parents going to die? I thought a while ago that they would and it feels like this is confirmed now. It would certainly make the story more real. Also, it would be nice if this continued past Eclipse, but not into Breaking Dawn. I'm sure you could write what happens after Eclipse better than the events of Breaking dawn.
As always, keep p the updates. No matter how slow they may be coing along. |
 MissZoey 2009-11-02 . chapter 77I loved it, as usual!
O her aunt and uncle are in Seattle? That's not good!
I'm still excited for her (hopefully) meet up with the rest of the Cullens! (Unless I am so unobservant to the fact that she has all ready done so).
Please update soon! I am super glad you have not forgotten this story! |