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Ea Ailill
2009-11-07 . chapter 77
Oh my gosh.

They're in Seattle??

UPDATE NOW!
NOW!
NOW!!
pixielike-alice
2009-11-06 . chapter 77
YES! You updated! Thank you so much!
And I love the new chapter! xD
Unerose93
2009-11-05 . chapter 77
love love LOVE it!
Infinant-heart
2009-11-04 . chapter 77
Happiness and love at the new chapter! Even if you take forever to update, I'll be in love with this story. I can't believe that Cammy is so surprised that Bella doesn't know everything. There is a lot of stuff that Edward doesn't tell her, she hardly hangs with most of the other vamps or werewolves aside from Alice, Edward, and Jacob.

Are Cammy's parents going to die? I thought a while ago that they would and it feels like this is confirmed now. It would certainly make the story more real. Also, it would be nice if this continued past Eclipse, but not into Breaking Dawn. I'm sure you could write what happens after Eclipse better than the events of Breaking dawn.

As always, keep p the updates. No matter how slow they may be coing along.
MissZoey
2009-11-02 . chapter 77
I loved it, as usual!
O her aunt and uncle are in Seattle? That's not good!
I'm still excited for her (hopefully) meet up with the rest of the Cullens! (Unless I am so unobservant to the fact that she has all ready done so).
Please update soon! I am super glad you have not forgotten this story!
Dot823
2009-11-01 . chapter 77
I could never ditch this story, even though I rarely have time to write fanfiction anymore, I ALWAYS have time to open a message that says 'New Chapter' and 'Puppet Master' from Fanfiction in my inbox. And then to open the link and read the chapter...I LOVE this story...it adds so much extra to Twilight, putting in new things. I really can't wait to see how you fix the BD problems.
MkGrays
2009-11-01 . chapter 77
This was amazing as usual! I'm always so excited when I get the notice for a new chapter for this story!!

only thing, next chapter because it takes a while (which I fully and completely understand and think you're doing marvelous job on time considering our hectic lives) can you make a note at the beginning of the chapter "previously: this and this happened, because it's easy to forget the event of the last chapter and I need a little refresher :P

anyways go Cammy! And more PAUL :)
Miyu29
2009-11-01 . chapter 77
Whoa. Total suspense. Seriously, Glitch. You gotta update soon or your readers are going to a-splode! Haha, anyways, The story is as good as ever, so don't worry about the whole 'un-beta, boring, or stressing about it' It's totally fine! I can't wait for your next update! Bai!

-Miyu-des
screamingSOUL
2009-11-01 . chapter 77
I forgot how much I missed this story! I hope she doesn't go alone or worse, that something might happen to Aunt Debbie and Uncle Bob.
jesslikescoffee
2009-10-31 . chapter 77
I continue to love this story. Seriously, I cannot tell you how odd it is for me. I'm usually a B/E reader. Love how you portrayed the Quil/Claire relationship, imprinting is definitely on both sides. I didn't see this coming, with Aunt Debbie and Uncle Bob being in Seattle with the newborns. Interesting. I'm excited to see where you'll take it. Thanks for writing.
Amelia Bedelia
2009-10-31 . chapter 77
AH! Cammy didn't even want her own parents coming to her graduation ceremony because of them having to fly into Seattle - gah! She should drive to Seattle - sans Claire and Emily or Quil and Sam would flip out - and maybe have a Cullen or a wolf follow along behind her. Or even with her, I suppose!

I'll be interested in seeing how this will play out now that Cammy no longer has free reign to go wherever she pleases (and make out with Paul whenever in the kitchen... Haha!) That'll certainly be interesting if her aunt and uncle start "laying down the law" in terms of her spending too much time away from home... :D

Can't wait for un update!

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia
peygoodwin
2009-10-31 . chapter 77
love it
untrust us
2009-10-31 . chapter 77
Oh thank some deity!
You have no idea how long I've been itching for you to update and you certainly didn't dissapoint.
I am actually not sure if I've reviewed this story before or not - but I'll just say that this is brilliant. Utterly brilliant.
About the breaking dawn issue - I believe Paul imprints on Rachel...however, couldn't that be a guise to protect cammy and therefore Bella in the long run? Furthering the secret keeping of course...
It's just an idea, I'm sure someone has already thought of it before.
Either way, this is brilliant and please update soon!
cuddlyybear
2009-10-30 . chapter 77
omgg. . .talk about cliff hanger!
i cant wait for the next chapter =) its really exciting.

update soon!
XxsweetcakexX
2009-10-30 . chapter 77
I love this story!=)
Please update as soon as you can
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