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Reviews For: The Cullen Mobile

Unicorns4774
2008-06-26
ch 1,
abuseawsome. i loved how u captured the characters. keep writing.

aras
DaisyFaerie
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuselol. Rosalie and Emmett building a robot? She really does love him to encourage him! LOL! I love this! :)
nataliexkathryne
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abusethat was super cute :]
somehow the cullen's getting excited over morphing car robot's is entirely believable.
Sanrio-chan
2008-04-09
ch 1,
abuseI read this off a suggestion from AssassinedAngel and I'm glad I did. This is the first Twilight fic that I have ever read (I just finished reading Eclipse two days ago) and I did laugh. You're very good at keep everyone in character. That's great!
~Sanrio-chan
twilightjunkie77
2008-04-09
ch 1,
abuseoh god that was funny!!
are you gonna add to it?
or keep it a oneshot?
its good!
Jadepriestess
2008-04-01
ch 1, anon.
abuse"The two of then proceeded..." just change 'then' to 'them'. That was the only typo I found, and you did absolutely fantastic! This was a perfect one-shot, thanks so much for writing it!

-Jadepriestess
WestK
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuse“No. We just want to be a Giant Robot.”

That, my dear, is the best part ever. XD I couldn't stop giggling.

Thank you for the random silly story. See you around~!
LoveAnime18
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseTransformers + power rangers + gundam wing = hilarious XD
GryffindorGal87
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseI loved it! =] A giant robot is the last thing Emmett needs! LOL! =]
MutantPopTarts
2008-03-25
ch 1,
abuseOh man. This story totally made my day.

I'm not gonna lie though. I would be TERRIFIED if Edward had a car that transformed into a giant robot.
colormeinpretty
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abusekit, I love you. that was so awesome lol great job. MY BEST FRIEND IS AMAZING!
AssassinedAngel
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseNo mistakes I noticed!

Tehee. That's just like them to have cars that transform! That was so adorable! And I could just imagine Edward leaving ice cream in the car.
loyal2U
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseThis story was funny! Especially the whole robot thing, I can totally see Emmett and the Cullens doing something crazy like that. Keep up the great one shots!
Orangy Jello
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuse:] I would love a giant robot! Hehe. Emmett's just so lovable. I love your funny and adorable oneshot. Everyone was in-character, and the story was wonderfully written. It made me smile! :)

-Orangy Jello

P.S. Maybe my computer's a bit weird, but when I was looking at all my past reviews in the magical Review History --heh, I just discovered that recently-- I saw the one I made on your last "A Glass Doll" chapter, and my review apparently put stars in the sentence, 'you mustn't be so ** yourself.' Yeah, it's supposed to be '**' instead of the stars. Sorry about that! (and hope you don't mind me clarifying that up xD)
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