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| Unicorns4774 2008-06-26 ch 1, | abuseawsome. i loved how u captured the characters. keep writing. aras |
| DaisyFaerie 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuselol. Rosalie and Emmett building a robot? She really does love him to encourage him! LOL! I love this! :) |
| nataliexkathryne 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abusethat was super cute :] somehow the cullen's getting excited over morphing car robot's is entirely believable. |
| Sanrio-chan 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI read this off a suggestion from AssassinedAngel and I'm glad I did. This is the first Twilight fic that I have ever read (I just finished reading Eclipse two days ago) and I did laugh. You're very good at keep everyone in character. That's great! ~Sanrio-chan |
| twilightjunkie77 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseoh god that was funny!! are you gonna add to it? or keep it a oneshot? its good! |
| Jadepriestess 2008-04-01 ch 1, anon. | abuse"The two of then proceeded..." just change 'then' to 'them'. That was the only typo I found, and you did absolutely fantastic! This was a perfect one-shot, thanks so much for writing it! -Jadepriestess |
| WestK 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuse“No. We just want to be a Giant Robot.” That, my dear, is the best part ever. XD I couldn't stop giggling. Thank you for the random silly story. See you around~! |
| LoveAnime18 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseTransformers + power rangers + gundam wing = hilarious XD |
| GryffindorGal87 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! =] A giant robot is the last thing Emmett needs! LOL! =] |
| MutantPopTarts 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseOh man. This story totally made my day. I'm not gonna lie though. I would be TERRIFIED if Edward had a car that transformed into a giant robot. |
| colormeinpretty 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abusekit, I love you. that was so awesome lol great job. MY BEST FRIEND IS AMAZING! |
| AssassinedAngel 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseNo mistakes I noticed! Tehee. That's just like them to have cars that transform! That was so adorable! And I could just imagine Edward leaving ice cream in the car. |
| loyal2U 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseThis story was funny! Especially the whole robot thing, I can totally see Emmett and the Cullens doing something crazy like that. Keep up the great one shots! |
| Orangy Jello 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuse:] I would love a giant robot! Hehe. Emmett's just so lovable. I love your funny and adorable oneshot. Everyone was in-character, and the story was wonderfully written. It made me smile! :) -Orangy Jello P.S. Maybe my computer's a bit weird, but when I was looking at all my past reviews in the magical Review History --heh, I just discovered that recently-- I saw the one I made on your last "A Glass Doll" chapter, and my review apparently put stars in the sentence, 'you mustn't be so ** yourself.' Yeah, it's supposed to be '**' instead of the stars. Sorry about that! (and hope you don't mind me clarifying that up xD) |